Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Aftermath - Part III

Monday, February 26, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Freya makes a decision ... and some Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Freya talk. Please let me know what you think!

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Cookies and milk. Funny how they always tasted better in the kitchen, even though her mother had never baked in her life. And strange to think these would be the last ones she’d have for a while.

“Do you think you could send me some?” Elena asked their cook, who smiled, drying her hands on her apron.

“Don’t see why not,” she said. “You always did like my cookies better’n bought ones.”

Elena grinned, wiping the ring of milk from around her mouth on the back of her hand.

“’Lena, use a napkin,” her mother scolded. “And Bridget is going to have far too much to do to think about sending you food parcels.”

“But what if I get hungry?” Elena protested, her eyes wide. “What if I don’t like the food?”

“Don’t be silly. And cookies are not a food anyway. They’re a snack.” She looked down at the small expensive timepiece on her wrist. “And it’s time to go.”

“Oh.” Elena jumped to her feet, cookies quickly forgotten in her renewed excitement, the crumbs falling to the floor. “I can’t wait!”

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“Simon?” Kaylee was standing in the doorway to the infirmary, watching as her husband finished redressing Freya’s left foot. One of the wounds had become infected, and although it was finally healing he was keeping a close eye on it.

He looked up. “Hey, sweetheart.”

“Can I … can we talk?”

“Of course.”

“In private.”

“Oh. Fine.” He looked at Freya. “Are you going to be okay?”

“Your wife needs you,” she said, a small smile flittering across her lips. “Nice to be needed.”

“I won’t be long.”

“Okay. Not going anywhere.” Just sitting in the dark, she thought, watching the two of them walk out into the common area.

Simon kept glancing back over his shoulder at the woman laying on the medbed, her face still lined with pain.

“Is she okay?” Kaylee asked.

“I don’t want to leave her too long.”

“No, I understand. It’s just …” She ground to a halt.

“What is it, bao bei ?” he asked. “Is there a problem?”

“I don’t know. Is there?” She lifted her face

Comments
Monday, 26 February 2007 09:23
Ohh... God, that made me cry..

One thing- I only comment on things I like. So, with this here, I LOVE IT! GOD! HOW CAN YOU WRITE SO WELL! Yikes! I love this!

I love the way you portray Freya's 'unhappiness' as i'll call it cos I don't know the right word. It's brilliant! I absoloutly love it! Keep it up! Can't wait for Aftermath IV!
Monday, 26 February 2007 18:48
Beautifully described. You can completely feel Freya's pain. And I like the idea that Kaylee asked Simon about the sperm test. She has a right to know and of course, I love Simon's response to her trying to assert that she's selfish and mean. I think you write them amazingly well.

All of this is so great - I wonder what River's going to do - I know it's painful for her, but can't she help? Can't wait for more!
Monday, 26 February 2007 20:24
Are you really Joss? You write so well and every character is so, so....

Freya is hurting so much. Please let her live.
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 07:20
I gotta ditto ncbrowncoat's comments...are you channelling Joss somehow? Cuz it damn well seems like it;D

Brilliant writing as usual, Jane0904! I was especially drawn in by the last scene with Mal thinking on Freya's nightmares and how he sung his childhood lullaby to her to ease her pain:D

BEB

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