Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Aftermath - Part II

Sunday, February 25, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Freya's dreams are getting worse ... Thanks for your feedback - please keep it coming!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3212    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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There had been a lot of tests, most of them totally incomprehensible. It wasn't that they were difficult to understand, but just that they didn’t seem to have anything to do with what they said. There were the usual IQ tests, which she knew she’d aced, but others, like picking a sequence of numbers that were then randomly generated from a machine, just to see if they matched up, seemed pointless. They wouldn’t show her the results, but the two men seemed pleased. They’d smiled at her.

Then they’d gone to speak to her parents.

She was going to be a Companion. That had been her dream ever since she was old enough to know what a dream was. To dress in those fancy clothes, to meet glamorous people, to be feted and adored … She knew there was more to it, had seen something in her mother’s eyes when she announced her desire that day at dinner, and it had made her blush, but for once her father nodded approvingly.

“I think that would be eminently suitable,” he’d said, his gravel voice rolling across the table. “A fine career for a Rostov.”

“Ivan, I don’t know,” her mother had put in. “She’s so young.”

“Genia, she’s old enough. And nothing will happen for a long time yet.” He’d made up his mind, and once he’d done that, there was no changing it.

Elena beamed, only wincing a little as Alex kicked her under the table.

But then her school had introduced these new tests. Boring, easy and predictable was her opinion, and she told her friends exactly that. Even crowed a little when Alex did nowhere near as well as her. Then her mother had taken her into her study one day and explained that these tests showed she had aptitudes that the Alliance felt should be encouraged.

“They want us to send you to a school,” her mother explained. “It’s special, with classes designed to make you work harder.”

Elena had never minded hard work.

Her father didn’t speak to her about it. If anything he ignored her even more than he had before.

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“Inara’s been keeping to her shuttle a lot

Comments
Sunday, 25 February 2007 11:51
Oh wow, this was fabulous! I love how well you conveyed the angst and Mal's utter devastation and helplessness in the face of what Freya is going through. Wonderful how the whole crew is determined to do everything they can to help and to key a weathered eye on their friend so she doesn't commit suicide. Talk about a world of sorrow - and then some - and poor Mal finally breaking. I loved Inara's line when Mal apologised for breaking her tea bowl - "If you want to break them all, do it". And she meant it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 25 February 2007 11:52
Ooops, I meant 'keep' not 'key'. Seems my fingers are dyslexic this morning. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 25 February 2007 20:49
Beautifully written and described. I love the parallel between Freya going to the Academy and River. When I read the first dream in part I, I thought for a moment it was River's flashback ... I think that's very telling.

I do not envy Mal or the pain he's feeling. I would like to get a bit in Freya's head though - I'd really love to see a convo between her and Mal. And I loved the Inara bit at the end. I agree with AMDOBELL, her response to the broken china was absolutely perfect ... It would have been great if she'd picked up hers and hurled it after him.
Monday, 26 February 2007 00:00
Holy...crap...that was just utterly heartwrenching, Jane0904! Between Mal's struggle to tell the crew they need to lock up all weapons and potential weapons or methods of suicide, and Mal's conversation with Inara at the end, I was struggling not to cry:(

Still...this is brilliant work! Definitely loved how you had Mal and Inara responding to one another during their conversation, and I have to ditto the praise for having Inara tell Mal he could break all her expensive/priceless/custom stuff if it helped him deal with Freya's status. Though my dramatic plot-twist Spideysense is tingling at a potential situation in the future...something realistic to this sitaution but definitely problematic;)

BEB

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