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The Hunt - Part XI

Thursday, February 22, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal faces Wing ... the conclusion to this arc, but it continues in AFTERMATH. Please let me know what you think, as all feedback helps enormously!

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Mal’s skin was crawling being so close to so many Alliance supporters, people who’d never fought in the war but claimed victory over those that had. The money behind it all. The only real winners.

“Why tents?” Hank asked. “If they’re that rich, why tents?”

“They’re playing,” Zoe said quietly. “Pretending they’re at the Battle, about to wipe out the Independents.”

“And they had tents there?”

“They’re not really tents. It’s a game.” She shook her head. “Not a one of ‘em ever got close to a battlefield except like this.”

“They’re Alliance,” Mal said. “What do you expect?” He looked at his crew. “Okay. You know what you have to do.”

“Yes sir,” Zoe said, tapping Hank on the arm and heading into the rapidly descending night. Jayne had already gone.

“Where are they going?” Dillon asked, watching them vanish.

“Got work to do,” Mal answered shortly. “So where’s Wing?”

“This way.”

He led them through the tents and temporary buildings, keeping out of the light, until they came to a ship standing a ways off from the rest, the main tent more grand, more solid and imposing than the others.

“There are guards,” Harrow whispered, and indeed they could see two men by the front entrance, and a slight movement suggested there were others to the rear.

“Then we take care of them.”

Dillon nodded and went to the right, while Harrow sighed and went left. Mal stepped out from the gloom.

“Hey, there,” he said, smiling sloppily. “Kinda think I got myself lost round here. Any idea where I can find the Bilbao?”

“The what?” one of the guards asked, his rifle trained on the man walking unsteadily towards him.

“The Bilbao. My ship. Only I think I got turned somewhere.” He tried to tap his nose and missed. “Too much good stuff floating around, if you know what I mean.”

The guard exchanged amused looks with his companion before relaxing a little. “Never heard of a ship by that name, friend. What type is it?”

“Type?” Mal looked thoughtful, as if he was trying to remember.

Comments
Thursday, 22 February 2007 09:30
I would just like you to know that you gave me nightmares last night. Thank you. It's been a long time since someone weirded me out like that. It was the sound of little bones giving way, and a voice on the edge of darkness.
Thursday, 22 February 2007 17:05
Amazing resolution! You managed to give Mal the chance to exact revenge without making him a monster, which I think giving the situation was very difficult.

I'm a tad worried about Hank though ... I don't know if in the end he'll be okay with it - think Fred and Gunn in S4 of Angel after they killed Fred's professor ... still, hopefully Zoe can see him through it, especially since she has killed before.
Thursday, 22 February 2007 17:06
Mighty glad that evil *wangba dan* is out of the 'verse and that his henchmen were also taken care of. How Wing could think himself not a monster because he didn't stay to watch Freya's bones being broken one by one is beyond the pale. Cold, heartless and thoroughly despicable. Can't wait now to see Freya heal and everyone settle down to a nice hearty celebration in the safety of the Black. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 22 February 2007 20:25
Fantastic as always!

Can't even think what's going to happen after all this.
Thursday, 22 February 2007 23:14
This was utterly and completely brilliant, Jane0904! Between Jayne and Hank's differing-but-joined moments of confrontation with Wing's men, and Mal's little showdown with Wing himself...I am in awe:D

Gotta say I am concerned for Hank and Freya though. Hank, while very Wash-like in behaviour, is a lot less capable of using potentially fatal force than Wash was...this moment with the thug in the toilets is a brilliant look at how the meek can do something mighty and troubling when they have to. My concern about Freya? The amount of abuse she took at the hands of the unnamed hundans is rather impossible to properly fathom, so her psyche - I think - gonna be rather Reaverish due to all the bottled up rage and fear:(

BEB

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