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The Hunt - Part VIII

Monday, February 19, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. They've found Freya ... Thanks for all your feedback - please keep it coming!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3571    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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River stood still, gazing at the still form on the ground. Now she said, “Why doesn’t she get up?”

Simon glanced sharply at her. “River,” he said quickly, appalled at her insensitivity.

“She should get up. Come home.”

“River …” Inara’s voice broke.

“Get her out of here,” Mal said, dark, violent.

Simon turned to his sister, putting his hands on her shoulders. “River, go back. You can’t do anything. Freya’s … Freya’s dead.”

“No she isn’t.”

Mal’s head snapped up. “Get her –”

“She’s breathing.”

Simon stared at her, the intensity of belief in her young face, then looked back at Freya. He moved forward, almost not of his own volition, and slowly went down onto his knees, reaching out to touch Freya’s neck. Mal’s hand snaked out and grabbed his wrist.

“Leave her alone.”

“Mal. Let me check.” He looked into the dead blue eyes glaring at him. “Let me.”

Slowly the grip on his wrist lessened until Mal let go, sitting back and looking down into his wife’s face.

Simon put his finger to her neck, pressing into the swollen flesh, feeling the silver pendant sunk deep, trying to reach an artery. He held his breath, waiting, waiting. Finally he breathed out, starting to turn, to look at his sister. Then … “My God.” He was so shocked he couldn’t move, his fingers still over the faint beat.

“Simon?” Zoe said, taking a single step forward.

“River’s right.” His words were almost inaudible.

“What?”

“I think she’s alive.” His professionalism, almost a separate entity to Simon the man, took over. He began to check other vitals, lifting her eyelids, seeing a slight reaction in her pupils. A hand on her chest, only light because of the probability of internal injuries, felt the slightest of movements. “I need that stretcher. Now!” he ordered.

Mal lifted his head, looked at him in uncertainty. “Simon …”

“She’s alive, Mal. I don’t know how, but she is. I’ve got to get her back to the infirmary as soon as possible.”

Mal stared as the young doctor began assess

Comments
Monday, 19 February 2007 11:08
Oh God, along with the utter blinding relief that Freya isn't dead (thank goodness) is the sickening impact of how and why they hurt her so bad. I wouldn't want to be in those *tamade hunda's* hands when Mal and the crew finally catch up with them. Xavia Wing deserves to vist each one of the nine hells for a good long while and die in absolute agony. Now stop reading this and fix Freya! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 19 February 2007 11:09
Sorry, dropped an 'n', that should have been *tamade hundan's* hands. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 19 February 2007 11:21
omfg! i agree with amdobell. it was like 'woot! she's alive!!' n then just gradually more n more sickened by what they'd done. =( so horrible. i hope all ends up well. nice work jane!
Monday, 19 February 2007 23:48
Well, that turned my stomach, so congrats - it means that you've not only written characters we care about, you've written them into such a compelling situation!

I cannot wait to see how this all unfolds. It's obvious that Freya is going to be out for a while and part of me thinks she may not feel much like talking when she finally wakes up. No matter how strong she is, there is only so much the woman can take!
Wednesday, 21 February 2007 05:14
Tian Yesu...this was utterly fabulous work here, Jane0904! Between the opening moment with River's remarks - does make me wonder though about Freya's mental state when she wakes up and starts recovering...gotta wonder if she'll start sympathizing with Reavers after this :( - the description of Freya's injuries from both of the Tams? I was sickened but unable to look away...

BEB

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