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The Hunt - Part V

Friday, February 16, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Wing has Freya in his power ... second bite Friday, and the angst is still riding high. Feedback is needed!

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River was in the corner of shuttle two, hunched up, her knees drawn as tightly into her chest as she could manage.

Mei-mei ?” Inara hurried inside and knelt next to her.

“Pain,” the young psychic said. “So much pain.”

“Who, River?”

“Freya.” She looked up and Inara was shocked. Sweat soaked the girl’s hair, and her face was white as she trembled. “She’s trying not to scream, but I can hear her.” She tapped her temple. “In here.”

Mal stood in the doorway. “What the hell’s going on?” he demanded, then saw River. “What is it?”

“Freya … they’re hurting her … hurting …” She was panting so hard, trying to breathe, trying to block the sensations of bones breaking, of flesh parting …

“Where is she?” he managed to ask. “Do you know where she is?”

“No …”

Inara tried to hold her. “River, you have to –“

“Can’t see. Only pain. Only –“ She stiffened, then moaned, clutching tightly at her body.

Jethro stepped into the shuttle. “River?”

“No,” River grunted, her whole body jerking, and she screamed. “No!”

“Dear God …” Jethro leaned forward. “What’s happening?”

“She’s … she’s linked to Freya psychically.” Inara glanced up at him. “She can’t let go.”

River groaned, hardly able to think.

Mal swallowed. “What … what are they doing?” he asked. “What are they doing to my wife?”

River shook her head, trembling violently, then sprang to her feet and ran out of the shuttle, the others following as fast as they could. But the girl was quicker. She passed Jayne and her brother on the catwalk, just running, trying to get away from the pain, trying to hide from the torture …

“River!” Simon shouted, chasing her into the infirmary.

She was on the floor, pulling drawers out, her hands scrabbling amongst the contents, trying to find something to make it stop. Her brother grabbed for her and she kicked him away, but that gave Jayne the chance to take hold of her, pinning her arms, holding her close.

“Better do something, doc,” he said, fighting to keep he

Comments
Friday, 16 February 2007 16:46
Oh, how I LOVE double bite Friday! The angst and the way you're describing the crew is absolutely perfect.

I have to wonder though how much Freya can suffer ... it seems she is the proverbial punching bag for just about everyone.

If I were her, I'd either want to die or leave Mal so that she could keep Ethan safe.
Friday, 16 February 2007 19:36
Ah...but Mal would chase right after her, TamSibling. The man has quite the stupid streak when it comes to people hurting any female he loves, platonically or romantically. Xavier Wing is gonna wish he had taken a bullet between the eyes after what Mal will do to him. Make what was done to Atherton Wing in any encounter look...merciful;)

And loved the four-way emotional Mexican standoff between Mal, Zoe, Hank and Wash. Could feel the influence of Joss all around this scene. That and the rather brilliant previous moment where Jayne's telling Hank about what he's been up to since leaving Serenity;D

BEB
Friday, 16 February 2007 21:16
Please post this weekend! Keep up the great work.

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