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The Hunt - Part IV

Friday, February 16, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal is beside himself with worry over his son, and now Freya's gone missing too ... The angst goes up, and I'd love to know what you think!

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“Miss Serra. How nice to see you again. And so soon.” If the serving man could have spoken with less sincerity, Inara wasn’t quite sure how.

“Miss Velez.”

“Yes.”

“Where is she?”

The man clasped his hands in front of him as if he were truly sorry. “As I explained before, she is not here, and I am not empowered to tell you of her current whereabouts.”

“I’m figuring from all that fancy talk he ain’t gonna tell us,” Jayne said, moving forward out of the shadows. The serving man took an involuntary pace away.

“It seems so,” Inara agreed.

“Well, ain’t that dandy.” Jayne grinned and picked up a vase. “Hey, this is pretty.” He turned it over in his big hands, aware that several young women had stopped to watch him across the atrium.

The serving man paled. “Please be careful with that. It’s very valuable.”

Jayne looked over at him. “That so?” His hands opened and the vase fell to the marble floor, shattering into a thousand pieces. “Ain’t worth nothing now.” He took a step closer. “Pretty much like the piece of gos se I’m looking at right now.”

Jayne in full-on intimidating mode was too much for the serving man. He turned and ran towards his office, slamming the door and locking it behind him.

“Jayne …” Inara admonished gently. “That was worth more than Serenity.”

“It’s just a thing,” Jayne said, grinding a fragment of delicate porcelain into powder under his heel. “We’re talking Ethan here.”

Inara nodded. “Then shall we?” she asked, indicating he should go ahead of her.

He grinned. “You know, for a classy lady you’re sure got a good feel for being a crook.”

“It must be the company I keep.”

Jayne crossed to the door the serving man had rushed through. “Knock, knock,” he said, lifting his booted foot.

---

Mal climbed into the corridor, looking towards the galley, seeing Zoe and Jethro inside. He strode towards them.

Hank followed, having seen him leave the bunk, something in his hand. “What is it?” he asked, but he was ignored.

As Mal

Comments
Friday, 16 February 2007 10:44
This is absolutely awful, having Freya broken and killed by Wing's father. All to get back at Mal? If the man had any kind of backbone at all (a fact which obviously his odious son inherited) he would have gone after Mal himself and taken whatever retribution he felt was owed out of him. This is just sick but I am even more sickened by Sheydra. A woman who was supposed to be Inara's friend, a fellow Companion. What a horrible creature she is. Really. She deserves to spend eternity with Xaviar on some remote little moon with no atmo. Okay, with that out of my system I am so relieved that little Ethan is safe. Just don't kill off Freya, *dong ma*? Little boy needs his moma and Mal needs his wife. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 16 February 2007 16:35
Oh yes, it seems the 'verse has only about 9 good people and they're all on Serenity ... Not hard to believe that Atherton's father would be just as cowardly as his son ... Ath had to learn it somewhere.

Although I am relieved that Ethan is safe, but I'm worried for both River, Inara and Freya ... this does not bode well for anyone.
Friday, 16 February 2007 17:38
Oh...this was unbelievably superb! The level of brilliance here with how you just kept building on the angst and teasing us with the thought of even more? You are a proud disciple of our lord and master, Jane0904;D

It's funny...but I really wanna see Inara have a little vis-a-vis with Sheydra. Inara just completely letting go of her remaining Companion-based veneer from the effect of Sheydra's complicity and laying into Sheydra for what she has done, and Sheydra trying to defend herself. It would be a glorious sight to witness Inara's final separation from the Guild through this denouncement *evil smirk*

Oh...if Jethro could channel Book for a moment with Mal? That would so rock, cuz I get the feeling Mal needs to "educate" Jethro to the way of the world and how his predacessor was a lot more big-picture then Serenity's new crewmember;)

BEB

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