Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Old Friends, Old Enemies

Friday, February 9, 2007

This is the second story in the 'William Alexander Chronicles' I'm writing. This one takes place a few months after 'William Finds Serenity' ( http://fireflyfans.net/sunroomitem.asp?i=14702 ). Some warnings, for those sticklers out there. People die in this story. Not any of the BDH's but characters you know none the less. I wanted closure and so I wrote it.

Also, as my stories progress, River will become more and more lucid and her's and William's relationship will grow. And as I said before, I am a big fan of the 'small 'verse' philosophy, so expect to see more of that.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2138    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

It was a calm evening on the planet Haven, the sun just starting to set behind the mountains. William stood some distance from the memorials, giving Zoë all the time she needed to introduce her son to his father.

It was a somber moment. The crew of Serenity stood on the plateau, each quietly grieving. The sound of Kaylee’s sobs were the only disturbance to the silence of the dead.

After a time, Zoë stood and headed back towards the group. William tensed up, as it was now time to face the truth that Book was indeed dead. Something that, until this moment, he had hoped was part of a bad dream.

William turned to face River as she took his hand and squeezed it reassuringly. William could tell that she wanted to smile, but the grief wouldn’t allow it. “Say your goodbyes.” She turned and started walking towards the others. “It’s the only way to be free.”

William strode forward to the stone set aside for Book. There was a holo-projector displaying a few second loop of capture footage. William found his eyes welling up despite himself at seeing it. He took a knee and bowed his head in silent prayer, for Book, the crew, for River. He raised his head, a million and more things to say jumping into his mind all at once. He had so much he wanted to tell him, so many thanks he had to give, but his mind failed him and he couldn’t put any of them into words. He leaned his head against the tombstone and began to cry.

After a few minutes, William was finally able to choke back the tears and he looked up into the holo again, resting his hand just below it on the stone. “I didn’t realize how much I missed you old friend until I found out I’d never see you again.” He said as he rubbed the tears from his eyes. “Funny how that works out, isn’t it?” William chuckled to himself. “’Verse is a darker place without you in it old friend.” William leaned his head on his hand. “I just wish I had gotten a chance for one more lecture, just one. You always knew how to be a son-of-a-bitch.” William laughed to him

Comments
Friday, 09 February 2007 12:14
This was very good though I was surprised at Mal taking a job that involved the Alliance. I could see him working with Sheriff Bourne as the two men have a mutual respect for one another, but the Alliance? As Mal once said, "That ain't us - ever." The bit that made no sense to me though was when Niska and Badger tell them what they want ('a life for a life') and Mal asks "Where to you want us?" Us? Then Mal takes Zoe down in the other shuttle knowing it is a gorram trap. Why take Zoe? Bad enough to put his own head in the noose, couldn't see him doing that to Zoe though. Everything else though was just so shiny, especially the part where Mal gets to make sure Niska really is finished off properly. I also liked it that at the end William is wary of River, he had never seen her pull out all the stops before and that kind of revelation would be more than a mite terrifying. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 09 February 2007 12:16
Sorry, I meant to say "Where do you want us?", do not to.
Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 09 February 2007 12:59
Glad you liked it.

I see what you're saying, and I'll word it better in the rewrite. The way the job went down, it was Bourne that hired them, just happened to be the Alliance had the goods for pickup.

As far as Mal taking Zoe with him, it wasn't really an option. I didn't come out and say it because I thought Mal's line "Where do you want us?" was a good place to do a scene change. Niska didn't forget that it was Zoe that lead the rescue mission that got Mal out, and he'd want to repay that favor. I figured it would be implied. Might have to reword that part as well.
Friday, 09 February 2007 22:57
Ooh...mighty fine stuff you got here, babywiththepower, though I gotta agree about Mal having some serious issue with taking a job even vaguely relating to the Union of Allied Planets;)

Still...glad to see Badger and Niska getting their just desserts in the end. That and I gotta give you props for having William start suffering some doubts about how he perceives River. Regardless of who Joss would have had River hook up, one hurdle would always be her imposed fighting skills;)

BEB

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.