Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

New People - Part III

Thursday, February 1, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal wants a little chat ... Short but sweet(ish). Let me know if you like or not.

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Mal stopped in the cargo bay, his thumbs hitched in his pants pockets. He looked around, seemingly at nothing in particular, then spoke, his warm toffee voice normal conversation level.

“River, we need to have that talk.”

“She’s not here,” came a voice from the top of a stack of crates. “She left.”

“Pretty cold outside,” Mal said. “Wouldn’t’ve thought she’d have gone without saying goodbye. At least to Bethany.”

There was a pause. “What talk?”

“’Bout Jethro. And you knew it was coming, albatross.”

There was no movement for a moment or two, then she sighed and climbed down. She looked at him through her hair. “Hello,” she said. “Did you miss me?”

“I guess we’d have noticed eventually.” He nodded towards a box. “Better sit down.”

“I'm fine.”

“Well, I ain't standing.” He sat down, perched on the edge. “Be obliged if you’d join me.”

She gazed at him then glided across to him, sitting down and slipping her legs under her. “How’s Freya?” she asked.

“She’s shiny, thanks for asking. And no changing the subject.”

“I just –“

“River.” He contemplated her, the hair she still used like a shield, the soft dress and bare feet, looking for all the ‘verse like a girl, not the young woman he knew her to be. “So.”

“So,” she echoed.

“So he’s here. I'm lettin’ him stay a while.” He lifted his eyebrow at her. “Why am I doing that?”

“He’s my friend.”

“Oh, I know that, on account of you telling everyone. But I’ll say it even if no-one else will. You were at Bathgate for a total of three days. You met the man … how often?”

River stared at her hands, twisted together in her lap. “It doesn’t matter how long –“

“I think it does.” He spoke kindly but firmly. “You’re making like you’ve got your whole life together planned out. He ain't a toy, River. Or a puppy, or any other kind of lost creature. He’s a grown man. So I'm asking what you’re planning on doing with him.”

“I couldn’t leave him to be hurt –“

“No, that’s plainly the case. And it was a piec

Comments
Thursday, 01 February 2007 11:28
I absolutely adored the dialogue between River and Mal, those two have a deep instinctual connection and knowing of each other that gives them the kind of intuitive understanding the others don't have and you have portrayed that here with a lovely deft hand. Great work! And yes, while I believe River is using Jethro as a love interest I do think he has another purpose, perhaps to help the crew in some way none of them have yet suspected. This is a very fine, keep writing! And can we please have more Freya and Mal goodness? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 01 February 2007 12:38
Oh, good talk.
Thursday, 01 February 2007 18:52
Oh you have nailed River and Mal and their relationship. I absolutely love it!

Mal and River as father/daughter, captain/crew is one of my most favorite interactions and it's beautiful when done right - just like now. Shiny!
Thursday, 01 February 2007 23:41
Ohhh...this was some brilliant platonic Mal/River dynamic, Jane0904! Definitely could see this as a situation that Mal would have had to address had the show been given enough time to explore River's improvement and development as a person post-Miranda Wave; River's situation of knowing that Jethro's an important part of the crew's future but not knowing why, along with her decision to make him a love interest so he can stay aboard and she can start delving deeper, is completely awesome:D

BEB

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