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SO LONG AS THE SKY SHALL FEED THE STARS [4]

Monday, January 29, 2007

Serenity crew going underwater to get Niska. Vera, Jenneth and Inara having messy fun with the children. Vera led to re-awaken her old sheriff persona, with welcome and unwelcome consequences. Niska gets very sneaky.

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PART FOUR

All you women who want a man of the street

But you don't know which way you wanna turn

Just keep a coming and put your hand out to me

'Cause I'm the one who's gonna make you burn

I'm gonna take you down - down, down, down

So don't you fool around

I'm gonna pull it, pull it, pull the trigger

I'm like evil, I get under your skin

Just like a bomb that's ready to blow

'Cause I'm illegal, I got everything

That all you women might need to know

I'm gonna take you down - yeah, down, down, down

So don't you fool around

I'm gonna pull it, pull it, pull the trigger

Shoot to thrill, play to kill

Too many women with too many pills

Shoot to thrill, play to kill

I got my gun at the ready, gonna fire at will

'Cause I shoot to thrill, and I'm ready to kill

I can't get enough, I can't get the thrill

I shoot to thrill, play to kill

Yeah, pull the trigger

I'm gonna shoot to thrill

Play to kill

Shoot to thrill

Shoot to thrill – AC/DC

Vera accepted Sarah from Zoe's arms.

“You keep her safe, now.”

Vera nodded, “To my last breath, if it comes to it.”

Zoe bent her head, “Momma won't be long. Got to go deal with a real bad man and rescue folk.” She gave Sarah a tender kiss and walked off.

Jayne lingered nearby, seeing how easy Vera looked with a child in her arms. He remembered them looking after Ping, then that screaming toddler and his kid sister. Playing Ma and Pa hadn't been nearly as much fun as it had looked from the outside. But there was still a small part of him wishing he could put a child of his own in Vera's arms, no matter how medically impossible that was for them and how dangerous, with the 'verse likely to bite back.

He sidled closer, “If we could'a...?”

Vera read the undercurrents and the unspoken message in his eyes, “*If we could, then yes.”

He nodded, satisfied. For a split second there was heat and gratitude in his eyes, “All I needed to know.”

“We could still adopt.”

“Not a baby, though. Had my gorram full share of them. If'n it were our

Comments
Monday, 29 January 2007 08:47
I apologise for this part taking so long to get itself written. It was sticking in the muse's mind and wouldn't write itself for ages. Seem to be on a roll now, though...

Vera
Monday, 29 January 2007 11:30
I really thought you would not be finishing this so very happy to see another chapter up. Love the story but sometimes the dialogue feels off especially Niska. And he never calls Malcolm Reynolds 'mine Kapetan'. I liked that Zoe just up and shot Niska though disappointed it wasn't between the eyes. As for the capsule, it is stretching it that it would have sufficient strength to knock out all the crew so he can get away. Him being triple locked up and all, it would be more believable if he had some men lined up to break him out. Be interesting to see how handle his Houdini act. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 29 January 2007 16:16
It ain't perfect....but it's damn brilliant, Vera! Welcome back to the fold ;D

Do have to make agreement with AMDOBELL though...Niska's "voice" seems a tad off. Not completely OOC, but not quite "Mista Reynlds";)

Oh...and I hope your decision of Mal calling Inara "little sister" is just a fairly harmless perverted remark. Cuz that would be mighty weird to think on...Mal and Inara having pretend CSI sex:S

And I too can't fathom how a capsule small enough to fit in a false tooth could contain enough potent knockout gas to neutralize the entire ship...less it's reacting with the recycled oxygen in a certain way;)

BEB

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