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Arrivals - Part III

Saturday, January 27, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Freya's son has been born, but there are complications ... Thanks for your comments on this so far - don't let me down with the concluding part!

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Simon was working frantically in the infirmary, setting up a transfusion.

“’Nara?” Kaylee was outside, watching Mal standing like a rock, unable to move, just a few feet away from his wife as she lay so still on the medbed.

“I don’t know, mei-mei ,” the Companion said, putting her arm around the young mechanic, needing to feel another’s warmth and comfort as much as giving it herself. “I don’t know.”

Zoe had Ethan on her lap, sitting in one of the easy chairs Hank had dragged towards the door. “She’ll be fine,” she said. “I'm sure she will. Simon’s a good doctor.”

Jayne just sat on the stair, hugging his knees, ignoring the blood that had soaked into his pants. Her blood.

“Simon?” Mal asked finally.

“She’s haemorrhaging,” the doctor admitted, his professionalism taken over. “If I can’t stop it …”

“If you can’t …” Mal echoed. He stepped towards his wife, then slowed.

Everything slowed, as if they were moving through transparent treacle. Then it all stopped. Simon was frozen in the act of inserting the transfusion needle, Mal had his hand reaching towards the medbed, and Freya …

Freya was standing in the infirmary doorway, watching. “What is this?” she asked.

“Time to choose.”

She looked to her left, to a young girl standing next to her. She reminded the older woman of River, with brown hair that curled softly, and wide blue eyes, but just as slight and waif-like as the original. She looked familiar. “Choose what?”

“Life or death.” The girl waved her hand, and the infirmary shimmered, seemed to split into two. Two Mals, two Simons, two Freyas on two medbeds.

“Then I choose life,” Freya said immediately.

“Are you sure?” The girl pointed to the image on the right. Simon started to move again, inserting the needle, opening the bag to begin draining into Freya’s arm. “Are you sure?”

“Doc?” Mal asked.

“I don’t know. If I can’t stop …” He shook his head. “She’s losing too much blood.” He lifted Freya’s legs, opening them so he could …

Comments
Saturday, 27 January 2007 14:12
Just had to push that angst right up to the edge this time...wonderful story!
Saturday, 27 January 2007 14:33
Whoa! What an angsty chapter. Wonderful and I love the end where Bethany want Ethan as her brother.
Saturday, 27 January 2007 17:25
When you went into all the awful choosing while Freya was adrift I was hoping and praying you wouldn't do that, it was such a relief when River stepped in and told Freya it wasn't real, that Eric Lon is one mighty twisted *wangba dan*. So very much dancing with delight to have a happy ending and I just loved Bethany wanting Ethan for her little brother. This was wonderful even if you did scare me out of a few years of my life, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 27 January 2007 18:00
Very cleverly done.
Saturday, 27 January 2007 21:49
Oh...that little plot twist was completely brilliant and unexpected! Having a mental remnant of Lon take on the form of what I presume is a grown up Alice and actually make her mother feel that she had to either choose dying and knowing that Mal and Inara would raise Ethan up, or choose life and see her son die of measles and have Mal die from how empty he would be? Absolutely fabulous work:D

BEB
Sunday, 28 January 2007 07:29
WOW! Absolutely brillaint ... I did not see that twist coming and honestly, I was torn as to what exactly Freya should do.

Once again, thank God for River.

And the bit with Bethany at the end - perfect!

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