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Arrivals - Part I

Friday, January 26, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Freya needs a few last minute things ... Please let me know what you think!

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“I'm grateful to you, Mal. The man who’s hurt is my foreman, and I can’t rightly run the place without him.” The man on the vidscreen was clearly more relaxed now.

Mal smiled. “That’s no problem. We’ll be with you in a few hours.”

Hammond returned the grin. “I think he can hang on that long. And I’ve got a new batch of brew I want your opinion on.” He laughed and cut the link.

“You think it’s a good idea, Freya going with Jayne?” Hank asked as Mal hung the link back up. “And us taking Simon?”

“They need a doctor.”

“Yeah, but so does Freya,” Hank pointed out, turning in his seat to look at the Captain.

“She ain't due for well over a week,” Mal said calmly. "And I don’t think I’m gonna tell her she can’t do that last bit of shopping she wants – all the arguing wouldn’t be any good for her or the baby.” He half-smiled. “And I've kinda got past the ‘getting Simon to knock her out’ bit.”

“If you’re sure …”

“Just get us into orbit, and I’ll let Freya know we’ll be away for the day,” Mal ordered.

“Yes sir,” said Hank, turning back to the controls.

Mal left the bridge and strode into the dining area, finding Freya sitting at the table, her head down. “You okay?” he asked, suddenly wondering whether Hank had been right after all.

She looked up at him. “Shiny,” she said, smiling. “Not particularly comfortable, but I guess that’s going to be the way for the next few days.”

He sat down next to her. “You sure you want to go down to Priam? I'm sure we can –“

“I need to get me a few bits. Just some stuff I need for when the baby comes, and some other stuff, and I don’t think anyone else can.”

“Frey, honey, what about Kaylee? She has –“

“Mal.” She smiled at him. “I’ll be fine.”

“I know that, but I have to take Simon with us: Hammond’s got a man who’s hurt. We’ll be gone twelve, maybe fourteen hours. You gonna be okay with that?”

She put her hand on his face, feeling the slight growth of beard pushing through the skin. “I’ll be fine. I’ll be waiting for yo

Comments
Friday, 26 January 2007 15:58
very good,cant wait to read part 2
Friday, 26 January 2007 17:52
Oh great story again, but PLEASE pretty please let Mal get to Freya in time to see the baby get born. It would be too mean for him to miss it no matter how close it gets. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 27 January 2007 03:26
Oh something tells me that if Freya's been having cramps for a little over a day, she's already very, very close to those final stages of labor. Something tells me Mal's going to miss ...

... and Jayne's going to be changed by it - River's in luck!
Saturday, 27 January 2007 06:55
Well...this was definitely a brilliant chapter, if a bit cliched with the "female character goes into early labour to cause dramatic tension" plot twist;D

Still...character behaviour and dialogue was spot on, and I have to give you props for the Mal/Inara moment in her shuttle. In my mind at least, if would be easy to just have them being completely platonic and at ease with one another by this stage, but I think it's the better road to have Inara still giving off "My precious!" vibes at Mal while he's trying to deal with his own go se and not lose either Inara as a friend or Freya as a spouse. That and the superb bit of dialogue between Mal and Inara about Mal's previously hidden skill of making tea made grin madly;)

BEB

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