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Winter

Thursday, January 25, 2007

This is my second homework assignment for creative writing, its a childhood memory with metaphors

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Warm white fur blanket covers earth

Sea of new white sprawling out

Shining softly under the hazy faerie tale moon

Its followers gently falling

Sweet radiant faeries dancing

Twirling, swirling to music

Whispers playing a mellow tone

Against the taut bark of the pine

Gentle needle hanging down

Falling and dancing all around

Leading in an ancient dance

Piling high above the grim

Cleaning away the day

Disappearing with the hot sun

Comments
Friday, 26 January 2007 07:37
Oooh..this should certainly net you a good mark! Cuz it's great stuff, Slice:D

BEB
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Friday, 26 January 2007 08:08
Slice are you getting more mellow in your old age?
Still loving it!

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