Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Moving On

Thursday, January 25, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. As Jayne and River have their little bit in NURSERY, Zoe and Hank come to a decision ... I am so pleased when you leave feedback and ratings: thanks so much!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3532    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“You think this is a good idea?” Hank asked, easing the heavy bag on his shoulder.

“It’s the most sensible answer,” Zoe said, hefting the box.

“But shouldn’t we talk about this a bit more?”

She turned to look at him, hanging back. “Do you want to move in with me or not?”

“Zoe, my love, my dearest, my divine being, I’d move to the centre of a black hole if it meant being with you. I'm just …”

“Scared?”

He nodded slightly. “A bit.”

“Hank, we spend every night together in one or other of the bunks. Usually mine, since I've got a bigger bed. Then you get up and go back to your room to change before going to the bridge. Don’t you think we could improve on that?” She put the box down at her feet. “Just a bit?”

“I just … I mean, it took a long time for Simon and Kaylee to move in together, didn’t it?” His scruffy brown hair seemed worse than usual, a sure sign he’d been running his hands through it. “And it was years for Mal and Freya …”

“That’s them. This is us.” She was calm, willing to talk about this, but only for a while. “If you don’t want to move in, tell me. We can take all your stuff back right now.”

Hank bit his lip. “What do you want?” he asked.

“I want you to get your ass down that ladder.” Zoe sighed. “But you ain't ready, are you?”

“Maybe not quite yet.”

She picked up the box and headed back towards his bunk. “I don’t know,” she muttered. “He finally gets what he wants and he doesn’t want it.”

“Zoe …”

“What now?”

“I do want it.”

She turned to look at him. “Then what’s the problem?”

“It’s … it’s a big step.”

“No it ain't. It’s half a dozen small steps, down a ladder and into my bunk.”

“That’s just it,” he said. “ Your bunk. It’s always your bunk. Or worse, yours and Wash’s bunk.”

“Is that it?” She moved towards him.

He held his ground. “It’s a big thing. I’m moving in with you .”

“Hank, I've got the bigger space. You don’t think I should move all my stuff into your small room?”

Comments
Thursday, 25 January 2007 13:26
Delightfully fluffy! Nice to see Hank hold his own with Zoe and that the both of them know what is important in life.
Thursday, 25 January 2007 14:36
very sweet, very shiny.

Almost enough to make me get over the loss of Wash.
Thursday, 25 January 2007 16:08
Now that's some mighty shiny work you got there, Jane0904! Definitely loved how you allowed Hank to go toe to toe with Zoe in his own manner: with humour, but also quiet respect and strength for the fact that Zoe's a lot less far along the grieving widow(er) track than he is:D

The Maya moment was definitely a highlight as well, if only for the banter;)

BEB
Thursday, 25 January 2007 17:51
Loved how Zoe dealt with Hank's insecurity and got them both to the one place they both want to be. I also really loved Hank suggesting Zoe put the dinos out again, but poor Rex! And a big grin for that little bit of Freya and Mal at the end. Your Maya stories rock, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 27 January 2007 17:42
I loved the whole thing - but the last line was priceless.
KAS
Monday, 31 October 2011 18:11
I'm in the process of reading EVERYTHING I can find that you've posted here.

That's about the highest compliment I can give.

Oh! And I agree with girlfan about that last line - Priceless indeed!

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