Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Possibilities - Part I

Friday, January 19, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon, Kaylee and River go to visit an old friend of the young doctor ... Second bite Friday, and a new story. Not as long as POSEIDON, but enjoy! And feedback, please ...

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“Simon! Knock me out!”

“What? River –”

“They can hear me!”

“What are you –”

She didn’t wait for him, but grabbed his medbag, pulling a hypo from it and injecting it into her neck. Simon wasn’t fast enough to stop her, only to catch her as she collapsed bonelessly to the floor.

“Simon?” Kaylee asked, grasping Bethany to her, her face stained with tears and terror. “What did she mean?”

“I don’t know,” her husband admitted, staring at his sister. “Unless …”

-

Two days earlier …

“He’s an old friend.”

“How good an old friend?” Mal looked up from his post-breakfast coffee. “I seem to recall what an old friend did once before.” He glanced at Freya, sitting with Bethany on her lap in one of the easy chairs, the little girl patting the mound at her waist.

“Baby,” Bethany said. “Baby. Auntie Frey.”

Freya smiled, putting her own hand on top.

“This is a real friend,” Simon explained. “Not like Eric Lon. Andrew Brooks is the man I went into medicine for. He inspired me, even as a boy.”

“How long’s it been since you seen him?” Zoe asked, stirring her coffee by the counter.

“Seven, eight years. But we kept in touch right up until I got my sister out of the Academy.”

“Does he know about that?” Mal waved his mug at the young doctor. “If there’s any likelihood he’s gonna call the Feds –”

“He wouldn’t do that!” Simon insisted. “I never told him anyway.”

“It’s not exactly been kept private that you’re both fugitives,” Hank pointed out. “It might be a while since they’ve been actively looking for you, but …”

“I know. But I trust Andrew.”

Mal sat back. “Well, we’re a long way from civilization out here. What made him decide to set up shop in this neck of the woods?”

“Just that. The last time I spoke to him he’d wanted to do some good while he still had the chance. He’s not a young man, Mal, and I think he found working in a hospital somehow … unfulfilling.”

“Treating all those nasty burns from candlelight suppers?”

Simon refused to rise to

Comments
Friday, 19 January 2007 17:00
No comments at all?
Friday, 19 January 2007 21:04
Loved it like always,cant wait for next installment.
Friday, 19 January 2007 22:53
Wow! Was the bit at the very end ... is that what River is hearing? I certainly hope it's not from Simon's old friend. The boy has so few, it would be nice to know that not everyone he used to know is completely duplicitous.

I love the set-up for this - and I'm so glad you're focusing on the Tam family unit - you write them well!
Friday, 19 January 2007 23:57
Oh...that doesn't sound good. In fact...it sounds like another batch of Reavers to terrorize our BDHs:(

Still...brilliant opening gambing for this series, Jane0904! Definitely can't wait to see what the Tams get up to with Andrew before all Hell breaks loose:D

BEB
Saturday, 20 January 2007 00:46
>“You want I should fix a better lock on your door, doc?” Mal asked, a twinkle in his eye.
“Don’t bother,” Simon said gloomily. “It won’t stop her.”

It wouldn't, would it?

Can't wait to see where this is going!
Saturday, 20 January 2007 01:22
This was all shiny until the end. Oooh, ominous. Whose thoughts are we hearing? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 20 January 2007 15:44
What a teaser you're developing for a tale of terror! Wonderful writing as always!

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