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Thursday, January 18, 2007

Homework for my creative writing class, its a describtive....

CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 2182    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Barely opened

Exposing

Allowing sweet scent to spill out

Spreading

Hinting

A gentleness

Laying

Drooping in the garden

Surrounded by bright life

Sweet green

Blues and yellows

True color

With your deep red

Mocking

Defying red

Tempting

Almost

Luring

Almost

Hinting

To what it can do

Warning

With its armor

Protecting its innocence

A sea of hurt waiting

To stab those who harm it

To thrust its only weapon

Thorns to rip through

Comments
Thursday, 18 January 2007 21:56
I bow to your obvious poetic skills, Slice...your skill with prose and verse awes me;D

BEB

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