Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Poseidon - IX

Tuesday, January 16, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Inara's poisoned, Mal's rescue attempt has ended up in his being captured ... the concluding part! Thanks for all your feedback, and I appreciate every last one of them!

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Freya laid her cards down on the table and grinned. Warwick Harrow sat back in astonishment. “How … just where did you learn to play cards like that, young lady?” he asked.

“Legacy of a misspent adulthood,” she said, gathering the cards back up.

“Well, I make that I owe you –”

River ran in. “Freya! Something’s wrong!”

Freya stood up. “What?”

“I‘m … not sure. It’s Mal.” The young girl shook her head. “I can’t …”

Freya ran out of the door to the bridge, taking the steps two at a time. She pulled the comlink down. “Serenity to shuttle two. Serenity to shuttle two. Hank, you there?” There was no response, just the crackle of static. “Shuttle two, this is Freya. Gorram it, someone answer me!”

“Freya, it’s Hank.” The pilot’s voice was strained. “They’ve taken Inara. I didn’t see who – they knocked us out, took her. Frey, they took Mal too.”

Wahng-ba dan duh biao-tze .” Freya breathed. “How long?”

“Five minutes. Frey –”

“You best get back here and we’ll –”

“No. Can’t. They mucked up the controls before they left – it’ll take me a while to fix it. Less if I had Kaylee here.”

“Freya.” It was River, standing behind them in the doorway.

“Honey, can it wait –”

“Trees. Lots of trees and grass. And water. Like a small lake,” River said quickly. “Mal knows it. So does Inara. And him.” She pointed at Harrow.

Freya glanced at the man. “You don’t think …”

“It could be,” he agreed.

“Hank.” Freya spoke into the com. “How far are you from Cadrie Pond?”

“How the hell do I know? Hang on.” There was muttering behind him. “Apparently about an hour and a half on foot, less if we can get Callum with the hover. But thirty-five minutes at least.”

“Too far,” Freya murmured. “And Serenity’ll just advertise we’re coming … Hank, get Dillon to call Callum. Get there as soon as you can. We’ll take Inara’s shuttle.”

“You think that’s where they are?”

“Shit, Hank, I don’t know. But I don’t have any better ideas. Do you?”

“Nope. We’ll

Comments
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 09:12
Oh no, it cannot be a while - now you've got Sheydra being all duplicitous and the knowledge that Inara's baby is out there ... oh good lord!

I'm so glad I was up late so I could read this - and now that I know what the title means, that's really cool!
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 11:56
I really loved how you ended up but then felt my heart quail at the realisation that Sheydra is in cahoots with Atherton's father, a man determined to bide his time to get his revenge on Mal for the death of his worthless son. Can't wait to see the next series though I hope like crazy nothing happens to prevent the happy birth of Mal and Freya's son. Also hope that all that green-eyed jealousy affecting Freya has been kicked into touch now. Shiny story, great writing! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 12:19
No, don't make us wait! That's all sorts of wrong!

What a brilliant ending.
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 22:45
And so mystery becomes clearer, eh Jane0904? Had been wondering about this story's title...mighty creative of you;)

And I have been waiting for that final little tidbit for quite awhile, Jane0904...there's no way such a plot idea as Inara giving birth to a child, thrown out to we fishies, was gonna be so simple. Now...to the really interesting stuff: Inara's fervent and presumably dangerous obsession to find her child when she eventually finds out. But not right away...maybe a discovery at the end of your next series?

;D

BEB

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