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Poseidon - Part VII

Monday, January 15, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Inara's home, but there's a problem ... Thank you for all your comments - it makes me think about the characters even more!

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“… so I told him, if that was how he felt, I wasn't taking the job.” Freya lifted the chopsticks to her mouth, noodles hanging either side. She didn’t know what Kaylee had done to the sauce, but it was tasty.

“What did he say to that?” Mal asked, quietly intrigued.

“Nothing.” Freya paused as she chewed. Then added, “‘Cause I hit him.”

“You … why?”

Freya shrugged. “Because he pissed me off.”

“And so few people do that,” Mal said witheringly, tempering his sarcasm with a smile. Freya was finally blooming with her pregnancy, and it felt good to goad her a little.

“Oh, ha, ha.”

“So what happened?” Jayne asked, picking a stray fibre from his teeth.

“Well, there he was on the floor. And that was the problem. He was so big, so … round … he, well, he couldn’t get up. He just sort of rolled around.” A grin began on her face as she remembered. “Of course then I started to laugh. I tried not to, I really did. But the sight of him, like a ball of flesh … I laughed. And kept on laughing. And you know how it is, when you laugh, you can’t do anything, you’ve got no strength? So there he was, getting angrier by the minute, and me laughing so much tears were running down my cheeks, neither of us able to do any damn good at all …”

The others were all laughing too, even Zoe, who was having to be careful with the wound she’d sustained only barely healed. It had been ten days, and she was a lot better, but it pained sometimes. “I'm surprised he didn’t shoot you,” she said.

“He couldn’t reach his guns,” Freya admitted, feeling a slight pull of nausea herself.

Mal said, “You’ve certainly led an interesting life.”

“Well, the joys of having your own ship.” Freya breathed deep to calm down. She’d had occasional bouts of morning sickness for a long while, and this was nothing she couldn’t live with. But she put down her chopsticks and pushed her plate away.

“Do you miss it?” Simon asked, watching her carefully, not unaware of how she felt, but deciding it was probably okay.

“So

Comments
Monday, 15 January 2007 11:34
Wow. I am just loving this.

And I really like Hank.

But who couldn't?

> “It’s half right, at least.”
Monday, 15 January 2007 17:42
Hank is like Wash's clone which is why I love him so much! And oh dear, our Big Damn Heroes now have to race against the clock to try to find out what gorram poison she was injected with. It was good to see Kaylee's spark of jealousy as well as Freya's but also glad that the green eyed monster seems to be losing power as common sense returns. Do hope they get the help they need in time to save Inara but then what? I kind of feel the enemy is able to keep tabs on them which is all manner of unsettling and creepifying. Good myth, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 15 January 2007 19:25
Holy moly - things just keep getting worse for our BDHs, don't they?

I really liked Kaylee and Simon's conversation - I thought it was very true to both of their characters, although I would like to see a bit more "loving" between them ... more comforting maybe is the word I want ...

And of course I adore Freya and Freya with Mal - I just love their relationship. But I am really worried for Inara ... something tells me that even if they manage to get the antidote, Inara won't stay on Serenity, especially if there's some lasting damage.
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 06:17
To be completely honest...I have been wondering why Inara's stuck around Serenity for this long? Inara officially lost any chance of getting with Mal once he got hitched to Freya...so seeing them together has got to be painful, if only subconsciously.

Still...this be mighty spectacular stuff, Jane0904! Definitely loved the Silee and Maya jealousy moments over Inara and her choices, and the revelation about Inara's heath was definitely a shocker;D

BEB

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