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Poseidon - Part VI

Sunday, January 14, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Inara is home, but is she safe? And this is not the end, either ... Thank you for your comments/rating - please keep them coming!

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The mule, an efficient hover that Mal had bought with some of the proceeds from the Lassiter caper, and had improved after Miranda, moved quickly through the wider streets, and it was big enough that people got out of the way fast. Still, as they reached the old town, the streets narrowed, and they couldn’t continue.

“Hank, stay with the mule,” Mal said, jumping down from the vehicle. “We walk the rest of the way, people.”

Although walking wasn't quite what he, Jayne and Simon did. More of a run, actually. It wasn’t very long before they arrived at the street Hank had identified, the rain easing to a drizzle.

“Mal,” Simon said, pointing ahead.

Inara was leaning on the wall, under an awning, her dark red dress stained and scuffed, but as she looked up and saw them her face broke into a wide smile. They ran up to her, Mal taking her by the arms.

“Are you okay?” he asked.

“I am now.” Inara leaned into him.

Jayne, his hand resting on his gun, said, “Think they’re still around?”

“I shouldn’t think so, but keep an eye out.”

The big man nodded, scanning the area.

Simon was checking Inara over as much as he could. “Your pulse is rapid, and I'm not too happy with your colour, but I think you’ll live,” was his verdict. “Do you have any injuries at all?”

“No, Simon, just a headache,” she assured him.

“Well, best we get you back to Serenity,” Mal said, his voice gentle now he’d found her. “Freya’ll be wondering where we’ve all gone.”

“Isn’t she here?” Inara asked, looking around in surprise.

“I wouldn’t let her. And she’s all manner of angry with me again,” Mal said, helping Inara to walk as the rain stopped.

“Angry? Why?”

“Do you remember what happened?” he asked, skirting the issue somewhat.

“I … not really.” She shook her head. “I was at the ball, Zoe was there …” She looked up at Mal and smiled shakily. “Didn’t she look amazing in that dress?”

“That she did. Don’t change the subject.”

Inara looked around. “Where is she?”

“She had a slight acciden

Comments
Sunday, 14 January 2007 15:26
Wow. Can't wait to read more!
Sunday, 14 January 2007 15:34
Loved that cliffhanger!
Sunday, 14 January 2007 16:19
You're getting awfully good at these cliffhangers - can hardly wait to read more!
Sunday, 14 January 2007 17:32
Uh oh, that last conversation has me worried. Sounds like that spineless creep Atherton has had Inara poisoned or somesuch and boy is he a bad loser, still going to go after Mal as well. Hmmm, I can't wait for him to get his come uppance. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 15 January 2007 19:06
Oh boy - this is just all kinds of fun - and of course by fun, I mean angsty, intriguing and downright unsettling!

Really loved your discussion between Mal and Freya regarding Inara. I just hope Simon can detect whatever poison Ath got her with so she can be saved!
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 02:24
Yep...Atherton is deader than a Fox exec's brain functions. Cuz if Inara does die, Mal's not gonna be the only person aching to make him suffer:(

And let me just this, Jane0904: cliffhangers + you = brilliant writing;D

BEB

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