Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Night Alarum

Friday, January 12, 2007

The first fanfic I ever read here featured Kaylee and her lucky wrench. Can't remember the title, or who wrote it, but thanx, whoever. Kaylee WOULD HAVE a lucky wrench, and it figures in the plot here.

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Night Alarum

It was late evening onboard Serenity. Mal was on the bridge, checking the settings for the

auto pilot. 'Most everyone else had settled into their bunks for the night.

The lights flickered, then blacked out completely. The ship bucked, then settled as her

main drive died.

Kaylee's voice cut thru the dark silence. " Doctor ,to the engine room. Doctor , to the--

Help!" There was a note of fear beyond fear in her voice, almost total panic. Mal turned,

trying to find his way in the dark, cursing. Then the emergency lights cut in.

Zoe got to the engine room first, buttoning one of Wash's shirts around herself, but

carrying her mare's leg, loaded and cocked. Mal pushed Wash out of the way: the pilot was

hobbling on one foot, trying to pull on a pair of pants, and barefoot, limping and cursing

about a stubbed toe. Book and Inara were there before him, and Jayne, checking out Zoe.

Simon came running up the stairs, carrying his medical bag, with River following.

Kaylee was standing on tiptoe, one arm dragged into the frozen engine up to the shoulder,

the other hand grabbing at an Emergency Stop button just within reach. There were

disturbing blood stains on the engine casing.

Kaylee was crying, little mewling sounds, mixed with faint mumbled Chinese curses. Her eyes

were wide and blank, staring off somewhere light years into the black. Simon stepped up.

"Kaylee? Kaylee? Kaylee, can you hear me?" She made no response.

Simon had dealt with hysteria before, in fact since his first year at MedAcad. He drew back

his arm to slap her, then hesitated. There were too many armed folk in the compartment,

friends of hers. The question was not would he be shot if he slapped her, but how many

times, and how much would it hurt before he died.

Another idea struck him. He leaned forward and kissed her, hard and prolonged, on the mouth.

After a moment , shortness of breath silenced her, then her awareness snapped back.

Disturbin

Comments
Friday, 12 January 2007 10:33
I can imagine Kaylee not wanting to drop the lucky wrench at first but she is also very practical and I think she would have let it go then gone and retrieved it but this makes for a nice little story. Surprised when Simon kissed her but loved how he ran the alternatives through his head first. Smart boy, top three percent and all. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 12 January 2007 11:46
Very nicely done.
Friday, 12 January 2007 13:43
Fantastic, very in character.
Plus funny and cute.
FIRLY
Friday, 12 January 2007 17:32
This was great. I can't blame Simon for reconsidering slapping her. Being thrown out the airlock might be the least of his worries if he hadn't.
Monday, 15 January 2007 01:00
Just re-read this.

Missed it the first time:
>and Jayne, checking out Zoe.

But that's the line that makes it perfect.
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 03:50
Oh...I could totally see Kaylee doing this! Not cuz she doesn't realize the only thing keeping her arm in the engine is her grip on the lucky tool...but because she wants said tool. I can think of a couple of people who would hang on to something for dear life while their own health was compromised;)

And loved the little blurb about Jayne checking Zoe out. That and Simon's consideration for getting shot were some of the best stuff here;)

BEB

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