Blue Sun Room FILK - FILK
Dresses soaked in rain and mud fall before the hearth
As two lovers hold on to each other
Desperate for the others presence
Soft kisses grow harders
Bolder
Moving to explore more
As they slip on to the waiting bed
Beneath the silken sheets
Fevered kisses meet exploring hands
As curves are newly discovered
Sweet whispers echo among the thunder
As they begin to move together
Cautiously
Gently
Exploring each others touch
Body
Afraid to hurt
Or scare
Try to make this rainy eve last
But crying out in bless as passion is finally filled
Comments
Monday, 15 January 2007 03:10
Ya know what? Graphic imagery would have totally ruined what you're building here, Slice. The tasteful and restrained visuals you present go a lot farther in helping to create the overarching storyline and character development than some blatant "Wham, bam, thank you ma'am!" descriptor would;)
BEB
BEB
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