Blue Sun Room FILK - FILK

#24 Loves Escape

Friday, January 12, 2007

....5!!!!

CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 1987    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thunder cracks in the moonless night

A free day ends in a warm summer shower

The young beauty comes into the stables

Soaked through and through

Putting up the trappings of the day

Laughing slightly to herself

Takes leave back to her home and room

When the earth and rain take a stance

And send her sprawling to the ground

Sitting there laughing in the mud and rain

Her betrothed finds her in the scene

When she moves to help her up

She only ends up in the same place

As they struggle to get to their feet

Slipping and sliding in the wet earth

The young beauty finally falls on to the cursed

Laughter dies with embarrassed blushes

And the rain seems to loose its voice

When they kiss they know its different

They know they can't fight it

As the sink in more

They know they can't be apart anymore

And the cursed uses her powers over her prison

To bring them to the one place that feels safe

The one place they truely feel control

Comments
CAPTAINNEREUS
Friday, 12 January 2007 06:29
Really good. Almost has complete flow all the way through.

Keep them coming.
Monday, 15 January 2007 03:09
Spectacular stuff here, Slice:D

BEB

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