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Poseidon - Part III

Thursday, January 11, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Zoe has gone to the ball to find and warn Inara, while other insecurities are pondered upon ... Thanks to everyone who leaves feedback - please keep it up!

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The ball was already in full swing when they arrived, although more people were stepping from a variety of vehicles, some as modern as Dillon’s hover, others more old-fashioned, probably antique, and pulled by horses. Callum stayed with the hover, taking it out of the way to park as Dillon escorted Zoe into the main building. She kept glancing around, trying to see if Inara were in sight, but she couldn’t tell.

“You know,” Dillon said as they waited to be announced, “I wasn’t exaggerating – you outshine all the other women here.”

“You ain’t seen all the other women,” Zoe pointed out, feeling slightly uncomfortable in the company of so many rich people without actually considering robbing them. “And you certainly haven’t seen Inara.”

They reached the front of the queue and the concierge announced them in a loud, clear voice. “Mr Dillon Malfrey and escort.”

“Escort?” Zoe breathed.

“I didn’t have time to let them know who would be accompanying me. But right now I wish I had.” He smiled and called the boy over with a tray of wine flutes.

“I thought Frey said you were sly,” Zoe pointed out, taking one.

Dillon laughed. “As the day is long, my dear. But that doesn’t mean I don’t appreciate beauty when I see it. In fact, perhaps more so, as I don’t want anything from you other to stand and admire you. And make the other men in the room jealous.”

“Jealous?”

“Look around you, my dear,” he said, using his wine flute to cover his mouth. “They’re all staring.”

Zoe glanced around, and indeed he was right. She seemed to be the centre of attention, and if made her even more uncomfortable. “If ain't me,” she said quietly. “Must be the dress. And I'm not sure the Captain would approve of people looking.” Nor Hank, she added silently, although he might just also have a slight edge of pride to that disapproval.

“What your Captain thinks isn’t exactly relevant, is it?” Dillon said, smiling. “He’s not here. So just enjoy yourself.”

“I'm not here to do that,” Zoe pointed out.

“Th

Comments
Thursday, 11 January 2007 11:31
There are times I just want to shake Inara so hard her teeth rattle. Why didn't she do as Zoe asked and just LEAVE? A coat is a nothing item, she can afford another one. Zoe would not have been there if not for a very pressing reason, you would think Inara would know that. Now Zoe is lying hurt, Inara is wherever and everything is about to hit the fan. Sigh. And poor Freya worrying about her man while Simon idiotically steps between man and wife to have a go at Mal. And Jayne, wonderfully solid and dependable in his own gruff way. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 11 January 2007 17:08
Oh man - Inara can be such an idiot! She should know, especially with her somewhat spotty relationship with Mal as of late, that he wouldn't have sent in the cavalry if he didn't think she was in real danger - and after the way Guild treated her, you'd think she would realize they and their associates are capable of anything.

Have to admit though, I love Zoe in this. I admire your ability to write her as she often confounds the heck out of me. She had better be all right - although I am greatly looking forward to Hank hovering by her side.

And Simon needs to stop worrying about Mal and Freya's relationship and start focusing on his own - I swear, that boy can be as thick headed as Jayne and Mal combined at times.

Okay, rant done - of couse all of these comments mean that I absolutely LOVE this and cannot wait until your next update!
Thursday, 11 January 2007 20:32
Poor Zoe. The angst!
Monday, 15 January 2007 01:18
Another brilliant chapter, Jane0904! Definitely loved how you had the characters act and talk with one another...lots of character exploration and complex emotional relationships;D

Really wanna chastise Inara right now though...though how much good it would potentially do is academic. Gotta agree with TamSibling: Zoe at the ball in a dress of Freya's with Dillon means there's something big going down and she needs to book! Not hem, haw and hold off:(

BEB

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