Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A letter to mal

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

I always like Gordon from godzilla final war thought hey would make a great browncoat. its my second fanfic and my first cross over its a short one shot fanfic unless people like it. please be gentle writing for people i didn't make in my heads hard for me

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2408    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"Sir we are getting reports that are soldier are scattered and confused we don't have enough people with experience to lead all our troops "

"Could you put that in a memo and file it under….Shit I already know "

The private gave Gordon a cocky smile "Sir the memo will be on your desk"

Gordon glared back at his private and smiled "Ozaki not the time, wave those garrom pansies that if the know anyone willing to lead one of our half ass mission to call him up we could…use the help"

"a sir"

"Its nothing just tell me when we get to that dirt ball, I'll be in my bunk"

Gordon lowered him self in to his bunk and got ready to write a message to a old friend and probably the only man that could lead these men.

"He is going to shoot me for even sending this wave well here me go dear Mal come with me to you certain and inevitable death or Common pal let's relive serenity valley you know the good old times"

Dear Mal

There was a time when I thought there was no true evil, no devil we were all just people and we do what we can to survive. However, that was then this is know the signal showed us the truth and that was a great good it showed the whole verse the truth about the Alliance. I've seen hell twice in my life once was that god forsaken valley the second time was a year ago. We were on Arial when it happen it was normal job nothing illegal about it. Hell I just brought my katana with me not my gun, can you believe I still have that old stick a family thing said to be from earth that was. Nevertheless, I am getting of track the black day on Arial. Suddenly Reavers rained down from the sky, alliance troops, and core revolutionaries. Started fighting a fierce battle taking advantage of the confusion the reavrs caused. Things have not goten betterr the core has gone strait to hell we have soldiers that aren't old enough to have their first rutt. What the reavers haven't taken over the alliance has blockaded to protect ya protect my ass their just keeping us from re supplying close to the war

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Sunday, 14 January 2007 22:26
Hmm...I see something mighty intriguing here...but it's buried under some rough spelling and other typographic errors:(

Might wanna look into using someone to proofread (either a friend or a beta reader) to help smooth out some of the bumps, Albio;)

BEB

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