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Poseidon - Part II

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Multi-part story. Inara goes to the ball on Persephone, but Mal hears some disturbing news ... Feedback, good or ill, makes my day (honestly!).

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“I hadn’t realised,” Inara said, fixing the tremblant in her hair, turning her head to make sure it caught the light. “It’s been several years since I went to the ball, not since the fight with Atherton, and this will be the first time I’ve been able to go as just me.” She smiled at Kaylee’s reflection.

“Wish I could go again,” the young mechanic said wistfully. “I had a good time, ‘til the punching.”

Inara laughed. “Just as long as it doesn’t end up that way, I’ll be happy.”

“Won’t they be surprised?” Kaylee sighed. “At you goin’ alone, I mean.”

“I can’t take you, mei-mei ,” Inara said. “The only reason I’m going at all is because, as Sheydra pointed out, I have a standing invitation.”

“The only reason?”

Inara laughed again. “No, not really. It will probably be the last time I’ll be able to, so I … I’d like to enjoy it.”

“S’pose so,” Kaylee said longingly.

“I’ll try and bring you back some strawberries,” Inara promised, rewarded by a wide grin on the mechanic’s face.

“Almost makes up for it,” Kaylee said, hugging herself. Then her personal light seemed to fade a little. “Did … did you and Simon have a good time?” she asked.

Inara turned, surprised. “Kaylee, you’re not jealous, are you?”

“No, no,” Kaylee insisted quickly. “Course not.” She sighed. “Only you … you ain’t said why you wanted him with you.”

“And he hasn’t told you?” Inara sat down next to the young woman.

“No.”

“Did you ask?”

“Well, no,” Kaylee admitted. “I didn’t –“ She stopped herself.

“You didn’t want to know the answer?” Inara supplied.

“Oh, I know it ain't nothing like that,” Kaylee said hurriedly. “Not you and Simon. I mean, I had notions of him and Freya once, but that was just … you know, being pregnant and all.”

“Are you sure you’re not pregnant again now?”

Kaylee shook her head. “No. At least, not as of this morning.” She sighed. “It just ain’t happening yet.”

“Give it time.”

“That’s what Simon says.” Kaylee bit her lip. “So what was he going with

Comments
Wednesday, 10 January 2007 11:36
Am I the only one feeling nervous that so many of the crew are leaving the ship? I would be all manner of panicky about leaving a pregnant Freya on the ship while everybody else goes traipsing off to make sure nothing bad happens to Inara. Really don't trust Badger, this could be just what he was hoping for so he could get Freya and Serenity. Okay, burst of paranoia done with now just anxiously waiting for more! Wish I could have seen everyone's faces when Zoe stepped out in the fancy slinky dress. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 10 January 2007 12:19
The intrigue deepens... wonderfully done, can't wait for the next installment!
Wednesday, 10 January 2007 18:01
LOVE IT!

I am totally digging where you're going with this. I find it interesting that now that Mal is charging to Inara's rescue, Freya is no longer (or at least doesn't appear to be) jealous. I would think Mal's reaction would make her more insecure.

And I really loved your Kaylee/Inara convo in the beginning, although admittedly, I'd love to see some interaction between Kaylee and Simon - and maybe Kaylee/Simon/Bethany over the uncertainty of things ... Can't wait for part 3!
Saturday, 13 January 2007 02:32
Oh...this ain't good. Either Mal's just made a massive mistake by falling for a trap and leaving Freya vulnerable, or the crew's gonna be outnumbered and outmanouevred by whoever is pulling the strings:(

Still...lovin' this storyline to bits, Jane0904:D

BEB

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