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Poseidon - Part I

Tuesday, January 9, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. First in a multi-part story following CHRISTMAS and TRANSIT. Inara and Simon head off for the interview, and Mal learns something to his advantage ... Please leave comments/ratings, even if you didn't like this piece!

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“He did what ?” Freya sat with her mouth open.

“He fought a duel over me. Didn’t he tell you?” Inara handed her friend a bowl of tea, careful not to spill any onto the bedclothes or Mal’s shirt she was wearing to preserve a little modesty.

“No he didn’t.”

“A sword fight, here on Persephone.”

“Mal? With swords?” Freya shook her head. “Oh, I wish I’d seen that.”

“He was defending my honour, apparently. A certain gentleman had insulted me, according to Mal, and he hit him.”

“And that led to …”

“A duel, at Cadrie Pond.”

“With swords.”

“With swords,” Inara confirmed.

Freya took a long look at the Companion – correction, at the soon to be ex-Companion, at the somewhat smug look on her face, and smiled. “Mal got stabbed, huh?”

“Oh, yes.”

Freya laughed and sipped her tea.

“Is this a private conversation or can anyone join?” Zoe asked, looking down the ladder.

Inara smiled. “Zoe. Come on in. This is a man-free zone.” She indicated the bed next to Freya. “I thought Freya would like a break from the Cortex so I brought tea.“

“And you should have seen her get it down the ladder,” the woman in question said, shaking her head. “It was like watching an accident waiting to happen.”

“Please,” Inara said, reprovingly. “I never spill good jasmine tea.” She smiled at looked at Zoe. “Would you like some?”

“No thank, you, but a few moments would be good. We’ll be landing at the Eavesdown Docks in about half an hour.”

Both Freya and Zoe noticed the strained look cross Inara’s face, but neither commented. She hadn’t said what the interview was going to be like, but it wasn't likely to be pleasant.

Instead Freya most deliberately looked back at Zoe. “Hank making a nuisance of himself again?”

“He‘s going to wear himself out.” Zoe looked at her. “And some of that’s your fault.”

“Well, he’s in love.” Freya shrugged, smiling.

“Not sure why.” Not that she really looked that worried. More … serene.

“Have you looked in a mirror lately?”

“You kn

Comments
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 13:16
Wow, this one is going to get interesting very fast! Excellent work as always!
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 17:04
Very nice!

I particularly like your use of Simon in this piece.
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 17:50
Oh boy - why do I have a feeling that the person who wants to see Inara again is up to no good?

And while I love that Simon is accompanying Inara - I can't imagine that Kaylee is totally cool with this - what did she say when she found out Simon was heading into Persephone with her best friend? If Freya is insecure, I think Kaylee has to be as well.

And I love your use of River here - she's just great!
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 18:19
I loved River in this, keeping everyone's secrets and not letting anyone wheedle things out of her. Good girl! I also liked her reassuring Freya that Mal loves her, married her, is the father of her baby and that she is the only one for him. I had a horrible thought that the man that wants to see Inara might be Atherton Wing but then he has a Black Mark on the Client Registery so it can't be him, right? Ali D :~)
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Tuesday, 09 January 2007 20:37
Could be Fess Higgins or Captain Harken, since both have met Inara. Or it could be Atherton, though I would think Sheydra would know about Atherton's little faux pas during a previous ball. Hell..it could be Inara's love interest back from the dead!

Still...while I have major doubts my lovely rant on Mal's remarks in the last chapter were the reason why you had River and Freya discuss what was said about Freya's insecurities and Inara's inability to give Mal a sign he would have much of a chance, I definitely I am glad to know there's more to Mal than some lingering sense of moral propriety that seems odd when Mal's basically given up being a good Christian boy long ago;)

Really can't wait to see what happens next, Jane0904:D

BEB

P.S. Concerning your PM to about my "friend" (though it wasn't a friend per se but a fanfic author who I have interested in your stuff in general), I could suggest FanFiction.net, since that's where I encountered them. Also, if you don't have one, ever thought of getting a LJ account?

;)

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