Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

That Which Shapes A Man 4/13

Monday, January 8, 2007

Jayne returns to his home world for the funeral of his beloved younger brother. The solemn occasion forces him to confront early events that have shaped his life, in an effort to understand the true meaning of family and loyalty.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2660    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

Title: That Which Shapes A Man

Chapter Four: A Rough Road to Follow

Author: hisgoodgirl

Disclaimer: All belongs to Joss. Just one woman’s take on the story. No money exchanged and all that.

Rating: PG-15 for strong language

Characters: Jayne, Kaylee, Crew, ofc, omc

Pairing: Jayne/Kaylee in some chapters

Setting: Just prior to "Those Left behind"; also, twenty-six years previously.

Word Count: 2,374; chapter four of thirteen

A/N: From the first time I watched Firefly, I wondered what circumstances might have shaped the character of Jayne Cobb, an exceptionally complex man. The given name "Jayne" was a common variant of "John" in Victorian England. This story emerged from the questions I asked.

Thanks to my excellent beta ArtemisPrime for making me dig deep and to my dear friend Kristy Bartley, Ph.D., psychologist and therapist, who introduced me to the amazing work on intergenerational family dynamics done by Dr. Terrance Real and gave me insights into the forces that might have created the character we see.

Italics indicate internal dialogue, emphasis or Chinese.

To read previous chapters, click on my name above.

Questions, thoughts and comments are sincerely appreciated. Thanks!

*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*

That Which Shapes A Man

Chapter Four: A Rough Road to Follow

Jared Corrigan is the middle son of Annalee’s younger brother, Graham. Out on his own for several years, he and a couple of buddies share a cabin in the hills above Ironton. He’s led his family to believe that he makes his living at spare jobs, and in fact, he does. Had Annalee known the true nature of her nephew’s inclinations, chances are good she’d have sent Jayne somewhere else.

Late that night, Jayne shows up, cold and tired. Jared’s initially hesitant to let him stay. Things are sometimes tight and the last thing they need is some dead-weight kid, cousin or no. “You’ll have to pull yer own weight,” Jared tells him,

Comments
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 00:54
Wonderful as usual...but I'm beginning to get paranoid that my praise is keeping others away. I can't believe you haven't had more readership for this story. :o(
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 05:48
I certainly haven't been scared off;)

Definitely still loving what you're doing with this series, HGG! Especially how you are showing the slow and completely understandable path Jayne is taking to his current state of being as crass, self-centred and completely dangerous:D

Though I am wondering if Annalee Cobb's gonna be having a palaver with her eldest soon about his source of income...

BEB
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 13:45
Thanks, Querty and BEB, I do appreciate your comments and would love to hear from others.

I see young Jayne as making bad choices out of his own desire to prove himself as a man and provide for his family as his father has failed to do. He's driven by good intentions but naieve about the slippery slope he's on.

Annalee's over a barrel, too. She desperately needs the cashy help, but suspects things aren't right. Mom's know....
Sunday, 21 August 2011 17:09
All I can say:
Love it!
And I learned something new. Had no idea that Jayne was a variation of John.
Shiny, thanks!

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.