Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

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Monday, January 8, 2007

Maya thread. Post BDM. Inara has an announcement to make, and takes Simon into her confidence. Then a little Mal/Freya fluff to finish ... Let me know what you think!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3231    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inara looked up from her uneaten breakfast and gazed along the table to where Mal and Hank were discussing their next trip.

“Yeah, but if we take that route we could swing by Ortega’s place. He’s had jobs for us before, and he never minds us taking our ease for a day or two.” Mal absently stirred his cereal.

“But it’s summer on Verbena. He’s probably in the mountains.”

“So? We’ll wave him first and find out.”

“Mal?” Inara spoke, and the captain of Serenity looked over and smiled at her. “Will we be going by Persephone?”

“Weren’t planning on it.”

“I have to be there in a week’s time. Could you schedule that for me?”

There was silence around the table. Inara never asked specifically to be taken anywhere - her client base was sufficiently large that she could fit in with most of the Firefly’s destinations.

“And why would that be, Inara?” Mal asked softly. “Some General can’t keep it in his pants long enough?” He knew immediately, even without Freya at his side, that his words were insulting, because he jammed his lips tight shut.

For once Inara didn’t take offence. In fact she smiled, which was much more disconcerting. “I need to be on Persephone in one week, Mal. I have been summoned to meet with the House Priestess there.”

Mal sat up straighter. “Over Medori?”

Inara shook her head. “No. They don’t know anything about … although I suppose it could be considered indirectly linked.” She gazed into his eyes, knowing they were blue, but unable to see the colour in this light. “I’ve sent in my resignation. I’ve decided I no longer want to be a Companion.”

Mal stared, his mouth open.

Kaylee dropped her spoon. “’Nara, you mean it?”

“I really do,” Inara said, smiling at the young mechanic where she was sitting, feeding Bethany.

Mal closed his mouth. “I … do you … have you …” He gathered his wits. “What’s brought this on?”

“A lot of things,” Inara admitted. “But Medori and Grace … I suppose that was the final straw that broke this particular camel’s ba

Comments
Monday, 08 January 2007 14:15
I love Inara and Simon, and the sharing of a confidence.
Monday, 08 January 2007 18:36
I do feel sorry for Inara but think you did an amazing job of showing just why she has acted the way she has done. I also love the Mal and Freya moments, the fact that they are going to be a family themselves and I hope Inara doesn't come between them and ruin that. Simon is a good friend to Inara and is the perfect person to go with her, I just hope Inara is right that the Guild really is autonomous and that he won't be recognised and given away to the Alliance. Kind of worries me him going with her for that reason. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 08 January 2007 19:41
Oh yeah, this was perfect. I love that Inara wanted to confide in Simon. I find it interesting that she thinks he is less judgemental than Kaylee, but I guess when it would come to pregnancy and children, Simon probably is a bit more level-headed.

And of course, Mal and Freya - just great - although I think Mal took a real gamble by using the number of Inara's sexual partners as the reason behind why he wouldn't want her. Not exactly the most reassuring thing ever. But I'm also glad that Freya realized the weight of the situation and that she could confront Mal on it.
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 04:03
Gotta be honest with ya, Jane0904...not really sure how I want to take this chapter, especially the latter half with Mal and Freya.

Now don't go and think me suddenly distasteful of your writing - because I still think you're a brilliant writer whose skils with the keyboard and cursor actually make me think hard about the kinds of issues - but I really have issue with how you had Mal defend his point by sitting down and making estimated guesses at how long Inara's been allowed to take clients, the frequency of those contracts invovling sexual intimacy and comparing it to Freya's scorecard. Maybe it's because I want Mal's issues with Inara's work to be based on more than lingering religious mores, but his words and actions seem extremely cruel and selfish, even for him! Also, a part of me just takes offence at how Inara gets portrayed (with Freya seemingly making no objection) as being a bigger slave to hormones than Jayne by having her sleep with clients most days out of the year for a proposed period of 15 years with little effort put forth to think about repeat clients (which would lower the number) and non-sexually oriented appointments.

Also, I have to wonder how Simon is going to explain his need to go with Inara to Mal and the rest of the crew. Cuz the reason(s) will get discovered and I can imagine Inara's secrecy - which from Mal's behaviour is well-justified - causing big issues.

BEB

P.S. Am glad you're exploring Inara's background and mindset though to show us that's she has not been operating under blind loyalty to the Guild but dealing with the fact she has been made to think along certain lines about who she is and what she is worthy of:D

BEB
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 09:01
BEB - you make a good point. But Mal isn't being cruel, or even making out that was the only reason he didn't want to bed Inara. It truly is against his principles, taught to him by his mother, that being a Companion is wrong. What he was doing here is taking Freya's insecurity and trying to give her something to hold onto, rather than just keeping telling her he doesn't want Inara. Maybe I was clumsy in the way I did it, but that was the intention. Although the truth is that he was always hurt by Inara's being with other men (it could have been 4,000 or 1, it wouldn't really have mattered to him) ... love, I think, he could have handled better, but being as he is morally against Companionship (or whatever the word would be) as well ... So this is his reaction (late at night and tired!) to Freya's hormonal jealousy.

But please, keep the comments coming. It makes me think about what I'm writing too!

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