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Barriers

Wednesday, December 27, 2006

Another PC fic, 6 months before Tough, definitely a prequel. Context hard to understand without Tough, but still readable.
Inara and Serra on Sihnon.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1975    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Barriers

Rating: PG-13

Characters: Serra, Inara, Mal. Brief appearances by Abe, the rest of the crew, and the Sihnon Serras.

Pairings: Canon pairings apply, but I've run back to heavy M/I

Summary: Another PC fic, 6 months before Tough, definitely a prequel. Context hard to understand without Tough, but still readable.

Disclaimer: Most of the characters (sans PCs and Ally) aren't mine, but the situation is.

For newbies: Brother, Shadow, Mei-Mei, Mischief, Pirate Children, Mistletoe, Hell-Raising, Barriers,Tough, Echo (?)

Author's Note: I've gone back to the Reynolds family for this one, which had to be done as a prequel to Tough. It's mostly Serra and Inara, with Mal thrown in. It's not... fluffy. Nor very pretty.

Kacey Washburn, 26

Lolly Tam, 25

Abe Reynolds, 23.5

Serra Reynolds, 18.5

Alistair Caramia

Part 1

She’s drowned out the droning prison bureaucrat, holding fast to her brother’s arm, probably leaving bruises. She’s too lost in the horror to care, though age old training keeps her revulsion off her face until…

Until, until, until.

Until they round the corner and see her, huddled next to a cot, knees drawn up to her chest. Eyes vacant. That hollow look Inara’s only ever seen in Mal’s eyes, briefly, before. A strangled sob leaves Inara’s chest. Fahmy’s voice gets angry, booming, like their father’s when the office would call during dinner with a break in a case, when he would hold meetings in his home office with opposing counsel. His lawyer voice.

Serra’s obviously been poorly treated: mal-nourished, sleep-deprived, and filthy, bruises sprinkled across her arms, bare despite the constant chill of the steel penitentiary.

“You hold this innocent child...” Fahmy bellows.

“She’s of age, sir,” the bored manager interrupts to correct, inciting further shouting from Fahmy.

“No trial in sight… thwarting all legal attempts to…”

Her brother’s voice slides in and out of focus, Inara’s eyes remaining trained on her daughter through the two-way mirror. T

Comments
Thursday, 28 December 2006 01:19
Your pirate children stories are always a delight.
Thursday, 28 December 2006 03:47
Aw, this is great! I'm so glad you're explaining what in the diyu happened to Serra when she was on Sihnon and also just how Mal so royally humped his family.

Really cool!
Thursday, 28 December 2006 07:40
Poor Serra, so happy that she is back with the family on Sihnon but so sad that Inara and Mal are not together. I absolutely loved Wash deciding enough was enough and it was time to save Mal from himself. Thank goodness, otherwise I can't see any happy outcome in either his or Inara's future. Great story as always! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 29 December 2006 07:27
It's strange...but the part I loved the most about this chapter in the Pirate Children Saga? Wash. Especially his seemingly OOC (but really not) behaviour wtih Mal. We really missed out on seeing Alan get his moment where he's the one standing strong when Mal and Zoe and maybe even Jayne are in pieces, forcing him to dig deep down and find the steel core he hides under the fluffy coverings:D

BEB
Saturday, 30 December 2006 07:16
"Even Mal’s taken Inara’s side; he is so absolutely in the wrong."

wow. powerful words, but so very true, i think. he would realize he's wrong while simultaneously having no idea how to make it right.

sigh, i loved this chapter. especially how little scenes just seemed to flow, one into the next. loved inara's quiet bravery too. just...beautiful as usual.
Sunday, 31 December 2006 20:40
*Excellent* in every respect, particularly the details - events and people and places and everything. Thank you for this!

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