Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Conversations II

Wednesday, December 20, 2006

Simon and Kaylee are getting ready for bed ... just a little light fluffiness. Feedback, please, good or bad!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3254    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Honey, I’m not so sure about this.”

“What?” Kaylee asked, checking Bethany was sleeping soundly in her crib and pulling the light cover a little higher.

“Your family organising our wedding.”

Kaylee turned to look at him. “Why?”

“I … it’s a lot of work.”

“That weren't what you were gonna say.” She crossed her arms. “You worried they might embarrass you?”

“No, no!” Simon said quickly, stepping forward. “I … it’s just … being done third hand like this … I …” He tried to gather himself. “I thought you’d want to be doing it.”

“You are. You’re worried they’re gonna make it some kind of big fancy hoedown. Ain't you?”

He tried to smile. “A little?” he admitted, waiting for her to get really angry with him and walk away in a huff.

To his surprise she smiled. “Honey, they wouldn’t do that.”

“Oh. Good.”

“That don’t sound like you’re reassured at all.”

“No, I am.” He smiled again. “Honest.”

“Come on,” she said, taking his hand and leading him back to their room next door. “You really need to tell me what the problem is.”

Simon followed her inside. “I … I wish it were just us.”

“Like the Cap’s wedding?” Kaylee kicked off her shoes.

Simon nodded, closing the door behind him. “Yes. That was just us, just family, and that made it so much more … fun.” It was a bad word to use, but the only one that came to mind.

“It will be family,” she pointed out. “Just maybe a few more of them.”

“How many more?” he asked, pulling his sweater over his head and letting it fall to the decking.

“See, you just don’t know how to treat your clothes,” Kaylee scolded, picking it up and turning the sleeves the right way out. “And I ain't your maid.”

“No, I know.” He took the offending article from her and dropped it back on the floor. “So how many more?”

“More what?” She shimmied out of her coveralls.

“People.”

“Well, there’s my immediate kin, a’course. Then there’s Pa’s three brothers and their families, and I think four of them got married in the last year, a

Comments
Wednesday, 20 December 2006 14:35
Oh - the fluff! How did I get so lucky? And not only is it fluff, it's Simon/Kaylee fluff, my most favorite kind!

I loved this whole thing - Simon's trepidation, Kaylee's reassurance and their discussion about the differences between a rim and core wedding.

And of course their concern for their crew. It's just absolutely perfect pillow talk!
Wednesday, 20 December 2006 15:04
“You never … ever … just lie there,” Simon said firmly, making good on her request.

So perfect, the whole thing, but I really loved that line.
Wednesday, 20 December 2006 15:07
Gotta agree with TamSibling, S/K fluff is the best kind of fluff.
The conversations were awesome and I craked up when I read the last line.
Wednesday, 20 December 2006 17:15
Nicely done S/K fluff. The last line was definitely the best.
Wednesday, 20 December 2006 17:32
Loved this to pieces! I really felt for Simon with the worrying about the wedding arrangements and hoards of Kaylee's family taking it over, though of course he was too polite to actually say that! Also some good insights into the Captain and I really loved Simon's last line "you never.. ever... just lie there". Oh yeah, that is definitely Kaylee! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 21 December 2006 00:55
Once again, you leave me a gibbering wreck with your literary brilliance, Jane0904;D

Definitely loved the Silee fluff banter, especially Simon's attempts to disguise his concerns over Kaylee's parents planning their wedding. Cuz much as they might be different in abundance and quality of goods and location, I think weddings are the same wherever you go;)

Oh...and the last time was just perfect Simon snark...even when it's padded with love;D

BEB
Tuesday, 22 April 2008 21:09
I like how you're able to capture all the voices. You do it adeptly. Thank you for writing.

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