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Monday, December 18, 2006

A story in the continuing Mal/Freya (or Maya as BEB puts it) thread, after LOST, FOUND and GHOSTS. Mal wakes up alone ...

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Mal woke up, staring into the darkness overhead in his bunk and sighed. He reached out next to him, but there was nothing, only cold sheets. There never was anything, no warm body to make his life easier. Only today it felt like there should be. That someone should be waking up next to him, smiling at him, welcoming him into her arms, into her …

He threw the blanket from his body and stood up, crossing to the small toilet. As he relieved himself, he looked at his face in the mirror above.

“Another day, Malcolm,” he said softly. “Another day,” and wondered why he felt so sad, so empty.

---

“There won’t be a problem, will there, Captain?” Inara asked, watching his face.

“No, no problem. This Companion we’re picking up, you said she’s a friend?” He stood with his arms crossed on the bridge, watching River making preparations to land.

“I’ve known her for some years, yes.”

“That don’t sound too friendly.”

Inara smiled. “Most Companions know each other, but I’m closer to Elena than the others. We met some twelve years ago, and have been good friends ever since.” She looked out at the planet below. “She has … exceptional qualities.”

“Well, the guest quarters are ready.”

“Thank you. I’m looking forward to spending some time with her before she takes up her new post.”

“Captain?” River said.

“What is it, albatross?”

“We’re coming in to land.”

“Just make it a soft one. You’ve been a mite erratic of late.”

“I will try my best.”

---

The ramp dropped and Inara stepped out into the sunshine. “Elena!” she called as the elegant figure approached.

Mal watched as they met, hugging each other. It looked as if Inara was right, they seemed real friendly.

“Inara,” the other woman said, smiling widely. “It is so good to see you again.” She stepped back. “And you look wonderful.”

“So do you.” Inara laughed. “As if it would be anything else. Where are your things?”

Elena glanced over her shoulder. “They’re waiting over there.” There was a pile of boxes an

Comments
Monday, 18 December 2006 09:27
Excellently done!
Monday, 18 December 2006 11:52
Absolutely fabulous! I was a little worried and off my stride at first not knowing what was happening and missing Freya, this whole other alternate 'verse angle was very good and beautifully put together. Loved the little touch at the end with Mal saying hi to River from her other self. Also loved that when Mal finally woke from the coma he wasn't just happy to be with his Freya again but also wanted to make sure Kaylee was still okay as well. You really are a terrific writer, just more Mal and Freya please! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 18 December 2006 15:25
That was really cool - I love your character development of Mal and how you take him through his paces just to see what he can do - what he can survive.

And I loved Freya - as always. My heart almost broke when it was mentioned that Kaylee had died in this alternate 'verse - I don't know if Simon could survive that.

So great!
Monday, 18 December 2006 23:31
Holy...crap! That was some freakin' brilliant stuff here, Jane0904! I was honestly freaking out and waiting for some sign that it was a nasty dream or the Alliance meddling with some seriously powerful forces...like time and space;D

Definitely loved how you portrayed Mal's struggle with first identifying Freya-as-Elena and then trying to persuade the crew to his position. This would have made a brilliant episode in the vein of 'Out of Gas' and the Buffy episode where the previous episodes were made out to be a delusional state being occupied by an asylum-situated Buffy:D

BEB
Tuesday, 19 December 2006 14:10
What a wonderful story - and so many good old fashioned sci fi elements to it! I love reading all your stories and delight in how well written and crafted they are. Please write more!

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