Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

What's Fair - 2/2

Friday, December 15, 2006

Post-BDM. Inara's decision is considered foolish by a few members of the crew, Mal most of all. Mal/Inara, Simon/Kaylee

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A/N: Get out your hankies, folks. This one ends sad and I make no apologies. My only defense is - "Everyone else is always doing it!" *stamps foot like a petulant child*

Thanks again to Kaynara for beta-ing and lending her Mal/Inara expertise. And thanks to everyone for all the nice, shiny comments on part one. Here's hoping you like part two!

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What’s Fair – 2/2

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Taking a deep breath and straightening her shoulders, Inara answered her door, one of her pristine smiles plastered on her face. Opening her mouth to greet her guest, she was stopped as Simon held up a hand and spoke first.

“Before you say anything,” he told her, stepping inside the cottage. “I didn’t tell Mal a word. He figured out all on his own that maybe we needed to come see you.”

Smiling, this time the expression reached her eyes. Simon was a dear man and good friend, not to mention an outstanding doctor. She’d had no doubt that it had not been his slip of the tongue that had encouraged Mal to take this little outing, but rather the man’s overactive imagination at getting a call from her physician. Laying a hand to his shoulder, she assured Simon, “I know that. I should have suspected that there was nowhere I could run that Mal wouldn’t find me.”

Simon’s bemused expression slid off his features as he studied his friend intently. In just the month she’d been gone, he could already see the effects of her illness taking hold. She was holding herself rigidly, as if afraid the wrong move in one direction or the other might cause pain. Her perfect face was creased with new wrinkles, and not the ones caused by laughter or smiles, ones instead caused by worry and pain. “Didn’t you want him to?” Simon asked knowingly, startling Inara with his insight.

Avoiding the question and the uncomfortable answer, she cocked an eyebrow at him and moved slowly to the sofa. Sitting gingerly, she said, “I see that being with Kaylee has given you a good deal of insight into relationships.” Watching as Simon’s face li

Comments
Friday, 15 December 2006 22:54
Ohh, sooo sad! I even got a little teary. And that's a big feat for me! :)
Saturday, 16 December 2006 00:18
So sad!

A fitting ending to your tale.
Saturday, 16 December 2006 01:08
*Cries*
For a minute I thought everything was going to be ok.
Then you broke my heart.
Saturday, 16 December 2006 06:20
Guess Mal's worry that wanting to have two miracles was an accurate one, huh?

:(

Still...this was definitely an A-1 effort, TamSibling! All the angst and character moments you had working here really got my hearstrings a-tuggin'. Just wish Inara's stubbornness had been quelled faster, as I get the feeling that she could have lived longer had she came round to undergoing treatment sooner:S

BEB
Sunday, 17 December 2006 00:27
WHY, GOD, WHY?... Oh, wait... WHY, TS, WHY???? *grabs a tissue*

Okay, I thought it was strange that you would have Inara walk out like that, but now that I have read your explanation I understand why you wrote her like that. It's kinda like the movie "The Queen", both have women who are private and stoic in the face of adversity. And to this I say bravo!
Monday, 18 December 2006 12:48
brillant and sad
Monday, 18 December 2006 19:15
Gah, more BDkids. And the ending came very abruptly. It seems like the last scene or two could be fleshed out a little more.

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