Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Ghosts

Friday, December 15, 2006

It's Friday, so ... a longish one-off after LOST and FOUND. An accidental discovery puts two of the Serenity's crew at risk ... Please leave feedback and/or ratings - thank you!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3557    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Jayne, be careful with that,” Zoe called as the big man lifted one of the crates stacked in the cargo bay.

“Why?” He looked up at Zoe on the catwalk above him, but found the crate’s contents shifted, and the sudden change in the centre of gravity pulled the box from his grip and it slammed into the wall.

“That.” Zoe’s voice was dry.

Tzao gao ,” Jayne muttered.

“You breaking up my ship?” Mal asked from the other walkway.

“No,” Jayne said guiltily.

“Then why’s there a hole in my bulkhead?” Mal asked as he descended to the bay floor.

Jayne looked around. “Gorram it.” There was, indeed, a hole in the wall where the crate had punctured the interior skin. “T’weren’t my fault,” he said defensively.

Mal gave Jayne a look as he passed by, going to inspect the damage. “Don’t recall seeing anyone else close by.”

“What’s in that ruttin’ crate anyway? Feels like it’s full o' – “

Dung ee-maio ,” Mal interrupted, leaning into the hole and reaching inside. “There’s something – “

“Careful, sir,” Zoe warned, hurrying down the staircase.

Mal grabbed his hand back. “Why?” he asked. “What do you think’s in there?”

“I wouldn’t like to say, sir. Just advising caution.”

“Well, it looks to be a box. Old too.” Mal, his natural curiosity peeked, carefully reached in and took hold. “Heavy.”

“Could be money,” Jayne said quickly.

“Could be a bomb,” Zoe added.

“Bomb?” Jayne took a step back.

“Well, we won’t know until we open it.” Mal lifted the box out of the wall and set it down on the crate that had done the damage. “But with what Serenity’s been through, I doubt it’s a bomb. It would have gone off before now.”

“Unless it’s set to when you open it.”

“Good point.” Mal examined the container. It was made from wood, with a design of leaves carved into the top. There was a keyhole, but no key. “Maybe we’d better get Simon to take a look inside before we do.”

“Good idea, sir,” Zoe agreed.

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Comments
Friday, 15 December 2006 18:28
Really interesting.
Friday, 15 December 2006 19:21
That was kind of cool. I like the examination of people who owned Serenity before. And I really think there needs to be more development of Freya's abilities.
Saturday, 16 December 2006 00:42
This is annoying, I just tried to post a comment and it bounced me out. Here we go again. This was an interesting story, more of possession than a ghost story and I liked how it all reasoned out with Mal finally solving the mystery and finding a way to give closure. What struck me as incongruent was that when he finds the box with the gun, bible and watch in it he took it out of the bulkhead hidey hole one handed. Yet when it was being buried on Purgatory it took Mal and Jayne both to lower it into the gorram ground. Does that seem right to you? What did it do, grow into a coffin sized box? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 16 December 2006 02:15
Didn't even notice the difference in the box's mass, to be honest;)

Still...mighty fascinating look at Serenity's past and the nature of River and Freya's abilities. I get the feeling that as the Naxom continues to wear off...more fun like this will surface:(

BEB

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