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Lost - Part VII

Wednesday, December 13, 2006

The last part of a difficult story to write. Grace meets someone who will change her life ... Feedback on the entire series or this one episode, but please let me know what you think. And the story will continue at a later point.

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Athens, a mixture of farmland and industry, was said to look the most like Earth-that-was, away from the Core, but right now it just looked dirty, with smog sitting above the cities. Not that they were in the city.

“Are you sure about this?” Mal asked, staring out of the bridge window at the expanse of manicured lawn in front of him, and the large house at the end of the drive.

“That’s what the listing says. Medori Sati resides here.” Hank shook his head. “Pretty.”

“Expensive.”

“Yeah, pretty tends to be.”

“No it don’t.” Mal straightened up. “Get the others into the cargo bay.”

---

“You look pretty,” Freya said, standing back and admiring the effect.

Grace was wearing a pair of loose pants in a gold colour and a soft red top donated by Inara, which she had managed, with Freya’s help, to get on over the casts. Her hair was clean and combed, falling in straight waves down her back.

“I feel odd,” Grace said.

“That’ll be the effects of the Heretofen,” Simon said, standing back and watching her.

“No, I don’t mean there,” Grace insisted, touching her head. “Here.” She touched the area over her heart.

Freya smiled. “Don’t worry. I'm here.”

---

Mal pushed the button and the cargo bay doors opened, the ramp dropping down to the ground. A faint smell of some perfume filtered in, making the normal recycled air taste stale.

“Ready?” he asked Inara, standing next to him.

“No. But let’s do this.”

They walked out into the sunlight.

---

“Inara?” Medori Donato stepped out of the front door and hurried across the lawn. “Inara Serra!” She smiled widely and hugged the other woman. “How did you find me?”

“Medori.” Inara closed her eyes and let herself enjoy the feeling for a moment, then disengaged. “How are you?”

Medori laughed. “So formal. And still a Companion, I can tell.”

Inara nodded. “Still a Companion.”

“And who’s this?” She turned to the tall, dark-haired man at Inara’s side.

“This is Captain Reynolds. He owns that ship.” She nodded t

Comments
Wednesday, 13 December 2006 18:54
Good ending! With a twist :)
Wednesday, 13 December 2006 20:04
I knew Inara was going to be pregnant - that demerit that Grace found was hers wasn't it?

Oh boy did I like this story - it was absolutely chock full of intrigue and angst. I continually feel bad for Freya who it seems can just not catch a break. I also feel bad for Inara - it's obvious that she still loves Mal and yet she can't have him ... It must be killing her to see him everyday and know what she doesn't have.
Thursday, 14 December 2006 01:09
I absolutely loved the way you rounded this story off and I did smile at discovering the demerit was really Inara's. I had wondered if it was when it originally cropped up then was put off by the whole Medori storyline so to have you come back to it and bring Inara into the same pitfall that befell her friend was nicely done. Just wish there had been more moments between Mal and Freya. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 14 December 2006 01:48
Ya know...I don't know if this new plot twist makes me feel more or less for Inara. Presumably, Inara's decision to rent one of Serenity's shuttles came after her child was born (though if it was me...I would have made the kid the offspring of Mal and Inara, just to make things really wonky;D) and she was let back in with serious conditions. Plus, it definitely makes one wonder about the existence of institutional Stockholm Syndrome, since Inara's completely aware of all these terrible rules but still stayed with the Guild till her current indecision:(

And I too would have like to see more Mal-Freya moments, if only because the latter is in the midst of another dark period because of what Grace/Alexa stirred up insider her:D

BEB

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