Blue Sun Room FICTION - SUSPENSE
Same Time, Same Place by debxena
DISCLAIMER: I like River. I like Simon. They’re great siblings. I would never make them do anything kinky together, so get your mind out of the gutter, thank you! Joss would be proud of me.
CHARACTERS: River / Simon
RATING: PG
SPOILERS: For Serenity
FEEDBACK: *nods* That would be lovely, and would make me happy *grin*
Comments
Sunday, 04 July 2004 12:25
An interesting take and I loved the thoughts going through River's mind while she is in the box and Simon is desperately looking for the right ship to book passage for them. It figures that River would find a way to talk to Serenity, loved that. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 04 July 2004 17:31
Very good job. You blended Simon and River's thoughts well. I really enjoyed it.
Monday, 05 July 2004 21:01
I really enjoyed this. You got the voices of the characters so clear, even with the back and forth I could "hear" who was talking. Made me kinda choke up too at the point with Kaylee getting shot.
Lovely writing.
Lovely writing.
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