Blue Sun Room FICTION - SUSPENSE

Same Time , Same Place

Sunday, July 4, 2004

River and Simon are closer than they realise, thoughts entwining as River is smuggled on-board.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3905    RATING: 7.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Same Time, Same Place by debxena

DISCLAIMER: I like River. I like Simon. They’re great siblings. I would never make them do anything kinky together, so get your mind out of the gutter, thank you! Joss would be proud of me.

CHARACTERS: River / Simon

RATING: PG

SPOILERS: For Serenity

FEEDBACK: *nods* That would be lovely, and would make me happy *grin*

NOTES: Requested by astarte99, part of the

THANKS: To astarte99 for her cool suggestion: River's different view of the world could be really interesting played out from 2 perspectives

In the world, but gone. No, I am the world. How can I be gone from myself? I know – genius mind in cold/dead body, brilliant mind in shock/stressed head. Walls expanding and collapsing, new pathways, old ones gone. Blue hand gone as well. Is the answer hiding? Or has the question ceased to exist instead?

Where is Simon?

* * *

I hope she’s OK. No, I know she’s OK. It’s good technology; it will protect her as long as I can continue to monitor it. But that’s just her body OK. How is her mind, her soul? Did I wait too long? No, I couldn’t get her out earlier, God knows I tried. Damn them for not listening to me when I said something was wrong! But they didn’t know. I hope they didn’t know.

Oh, mei-mei, what have they done to you?

* * *

There he is – out there, near me. My body is sleeping cold but finally I wander free in the sunshine. I can hear him worry, worry for me. Sagua Simon. It will be alright, now. Your hand is warm in mine, even if you don’t feel it.

Oh, but this is a pretty ship! Serenity. Serene and peaceful with her crew, her state of being. People live here. Pink hands. Brown hands. Physical and real, whimsical dancing in the engines. Hello Serenity. Would you like us to live with you?

We should go here, Simon. Simon?

* * *

I don’t want to leave here but we can’t go home. If they catch

Comments
Sunday, 04 July 2004 12:25
An interesting take and I loved the thoughts going through River's mind while she is in the box and Simon is desperately looking for the right ship to book passage for them. It figures that River would find a way to talk to Serenity, loved that. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 04 July 2004 17:31
Very good job. You blended Simon and River's thoughts well. I really enjoyed it.
Monday, 05 July 2004 21:01
I really enjoyed this. You got the voices of the characters so clear, even with the back and forth I could "hear" who was talking. Made me kinda choke up too at the point with Kaylee getting shot.

Lovely writing.

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