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Echo

Friday, December 8, 2006

A Pirate Children oneshot. Mal and Serra on Shadow, five times.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1810    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Echo

Rating: G and fluuuuuuuffy

Characters: Mal and Serra, with brief appearances by Inara, Abram, and Aristaeus Westgate.

Pairings: Ermm, a little M/I and Serra/Ari

Summary: A Pirate Children oneshot, set across the time period between Mei-Mei and Tough.

Author's Note: Getting the Mal and Serra cuteness out of the way so I can focus on Kacey for my Christmas story and also giving Mal and Serra a little resolution that many felt were lacking at the end of Tough

For newbies: Brother, Shadow, Mei-Mei, Mischief, Pirate Children, Hell-Raising, Tough, Echo (?)

Cold beer in one hand, the other supporting the Mei-Mei’s rump, her head resting on his shoulder, Mal settles back onto one of whitewashed rocking chairs with a sigh. The ruckus of the family gathering inside fades to a dull roar, the warm breeze off the river brushing his face. His two-month-old daughter snuggles further into his shoulder, tiny fists grabbing onto his navy shirt as she emits a yawn that seems too large for her small size. He chuckles, brushing a soft kiss across the smattering of dark hair on her crown and then taking a swig of his brew.

He likes it here, for a brief respite between rougher jobs at least. Permanent settlement? No, he’s not up for that. Certainly not yet.

Mal sets down his beer and holds out little Serra. She meets his blue eyes with a pair of eyes that are already losing their newborn blue in favor of her mother’s brown. She’s very alert for her age, focusing on him momentarily before searching her surroundings for something more interesting. Mal bounces her a little, then returns her to his shoulder as she yawns again.

“Alright, Mei-Mei,” he smiles, rubbing her back through the soft cotton of her T-shirt and patting her diapered bottom. “Get your snooze in.”

And, for what he is sure will be one of the few times in her life, she seems obey, her dark eyes drooping closed in sleep. He drops another kiss against the baby soft skin of her temple and leans his head against the back of chair

Comments
Friday, 08 December 2006 23:31
Ah, just adored that last line! And I don't think I ever said it but I love how Mal calls Serra baby-mine, it just fits somehow. You really beautifully mapped a father's feelings as he watches his daughter grow from baby to grown up and his reaction to Ari was classic. I think I may just give up writing fan fic and just read yours, it really is that good! *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 09 December 2006 04:18
Oh...that was freaking unbelieavable work, AWindsor! Sheer brilliance in capturing the 5 stages of Mal and Serra's relationship (so far) so well in such a short amount of space....authors well-recognized and praised search for the skill you showed off here:D

BEB
Saturday, 09 December 2006 14:11
This was sheer pleasure to read and so full of imagery I "watched it" as I read it. Truly a delightful work.
Sunday, 10 December 2006 13:22
u suck. u've gotta stop writing these man, i'm getting hooked!!! these pirate children stories are like my frigging drug! and not the painful, gross tasting drug, but the morphiney drug: too much is not good, and yet its just so good.
anyways, a lovely story once again, nice fluff and well written.
more please soon!!!
-Fred
Monday, 11 December 2006 04:17
I LOVE this story. It makes me want to be there with my papa who is currently 200 miles away decorating the Christmas tree.

Btw, every time I read something from your Pirate Children series, this is what I see (you may need to copy and paste this):

http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=109763707&imageID=1405365767
Thursday, 14 December 2006 06:08
"Abe insists that they’re the same person at different stages of life, and Mal can’t help but be scared by that. He doesn’t want his baby girl to have to go through everything he went through just to find a piece of happiness, just to carve out her own little piece of stability."

aww poor mal, having to watch serra re-make his mistakes. but they really do love each other, deeply, and that makes up for a lot.
Sunday, 23 November 2008 20:16
The flow of this piece is phenomenal. I can feel the love, the passage of time and taste the salt marsh breezes on my tongue. I can see where having Mal for a father might make a girl a might rebellious.

Thanks for another wonderful look at the children of Serenity.

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