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Lost - Part III

Friday, December 8, 2006

What secret has Inara not shared with the crew of Serenity? I'm still not totally happy with this story, but if you keep leaving feedback/ratings, I'll keep writing it.

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“Inara, why aren’t you at your study?”

She looked up guiltily from the book she was reading. “I’m ... I'm sorry,” she stammered. “I didn’t realise the time.”

Medori Donato smiled down at her. “And you couldn’t pull yourself away from that?” She pointed at the book.

“No, I …”

“Let me see it.”

Inara handed it over unwillingly. “It’s just something I found.”

“Hmmn.” Medori studied the lurid cover showing two people locked in each other’s arms, kissing passionately as they lay, rather improbably, in a hammock strung between two palm trees. “High literature.”

Inara blushed, something the rest of her teachers at the Training House had been trying unsuccessfully to stop. “I wanted to read something romantic,” she explained, dropping her head. “One of the maids got it for me.”

“You know you could be disciplined for this?” Medori sat down next to the young girl on the green satin sofa.

“I know.” Inara’s voice was small.

“You know why it isn’t allowed?”

Inara nodded. “It isn’t real.”

“No. It isn’t. There has never been a time when a man would come along on his white horse and sweep you off your feet, carrying you into the sunset.” Medori put her arm around her shoulders. “And if there were, you can be sure there would be horse shit somewhere along the line.”

Inara looked up in surprise, and just a little shock, her lips lifting just a little. No-one said words like that here. “It wasn’t … I didn’t mean …”

Medori sighed. “How old are you, Inara?”

“Fifteen.”

So very young. “And when will you be sixteen?”

“In three months.” Her eyes plunged to her hands again.

“And you’re not looking forward to it?”

“I am!” the girl insisted. “But …”

“It’s passage into something else, isn’t it? No matter how painless or easy we make it, losing your virginity can be traumatic.”

“Was it for you?” Inara asked, the words spilling from her mouth.

Medori laughed. “It was terrible!” She shook her head. “Not just for me, either. The young man didn’t know wh

Comments
Friday, 08 December 2006 11:48
I knew I had good reason to hate the gorram Guild1 Poor Medori, I hope Simon can help her. It also explains why Medori didn't punish the young Inara Serra for being a romantic. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 December 2006 12:24
please continue great story
Saturday, 09 December 2006 03:28
Well...it wasn't Nandi, which when I think on it, is understandable. Nandi's resignation or dismissal was too recent from what I interpret all the evidence in "Heart of Gold" for her to have been the young woman's mother. Still...not really seeing Inara in the best light right now concerning her choice to stay with the Guild. With this flashback as an example, Inara's had two important women in her life lost to her officially because of the Guild's rules on conduct and behaviour...so her decision to stay with them when Mal could have at least made an effort at being there for her does give me pause.

Still...brilliant stuff, Jane0904! Definitely can't wait to see what happens next!

BEB
Wednesday, 13 December 2006 05:10
Oh boy, with an example like this no wonder Inara has always avoided falling in love like the plague.
Saturday, 02 February 2008 02:24
heh, inara looks good for 32. i gotta get me some of her lotions and potions.

b

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