Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Best Intentions, ch. 16

Saturday, December 2, 2006

Post-BDM. In the aftermath of the Tams' visit, everyone tries to continue on with their lives. Inara follows through on a decision and worries about the consequences, while Simon and Kaylee finally decide on the next phase of their life. NC-17 for some lovin'. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara

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A/N: I am so glad that the Tams and their interaction with Simon and River was so well-received. I tried very hard with this story not to paint them as villians as it is often the easier route to take ... trust me, it was a struggle!

This chapter sees a bit more fluff, which I hope you all enjoy. Comment and tell me about it!

And to Leiasky - for the beta, the updates on Flan (which is a GO, thank Buddha) and everything else. You're just great!

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Best Intentions, ch. 16

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Inara could not sleep, which did not surprise her. With a warm mug of tea cradled in her hands, she stepped out onto the terrace that ran the length of her’s and Mal’s apartment and let the cool night breeze fan her face. With a contented sigh, she walked towards a lounge chair and pulled her robe about her a bit more snugly as she sank into the cushion and leaned her head back to look at the stars.

Mal was leaving tomorrow on a job and Inara had elected to stay behind. The decision had not gone over well. Mal of course assumed this was the beginning of the end; her first refusal to sail with him and he worried even more that if he left her behind, on this fancy planet where she obviously fit so soundly, he would lose her for good.

Her lips curled into a tight grin at the thought. Raising her tea to her lips, she took a tentative sip, the hot liquid just burning the tip of her tongue before it washed down her throat and to her belly. Inara knew, from years of training and experience, that men truly were dense, but Malcolm Reynolds had raised cluelessness to a whole other art form.

In Inara’s mind the fact that he panicked over losing her was both endearing and frustrating; endearing because it told her, without Mal having to actually say the words, how much he cared, how much she meant to him. Inara had never had someone love her that deeply, not even Jeremiah. But it frustrated her as well, because it also meant she had to spend countless hours of each day assuring him that she was not going t

Comments
Saturday, 02 December 2006 04:03
Ok, this was cute... very cute. Not much angst, though I do like the angsty bits with Inara.

I have to admit, I was hoping you'd pick up with the rest of the conversation with River, Simon and their parents.

And I can't wait to see how you wrap things up with Inara and the Guild. All around shiny!
Saturday, 02 December 2006 04:07
Hot diggity that was great stuff, TamSibling! Lots of perfectly constructed love scenes - not too smutty or graphic, but still full of the je ne sais quoi that sells the moment - and I just loved Eli's interactions with Kaylee and Simon:D

BEB
Saturday, 02 December 2006 05:00
I could kick Simon.
This cannot end well.
Saturday, 02 December 2006 07:57
I can just imagine the Guild poking their noses into every aspect of Inara's life because she wants to leave. Thank goodness Mal won't be anywhere near when they start their digging, I just hope it will all be over by the time Serenity gets back. As for Simon, he is a boob but we still love him! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 05 December 2006 17:18
Inara knew, from years of training and experience, that men truly were dense, but Malcolm Reynolds had raised cluelessness to a whole other art form.
~HAHAHAHAHA great line

I like that Simon finally asked Kaylee about staying, even though it too the not so subtle encouragement of Eli.

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