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Commitment - Part II

Friday, December 1, 2006

Friday, 2nd bite ... Does this make it clearer ... or stir up the mud? Let me know!

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That was it. Too many people, too much noise when she was used to the space of Serenity and the hum of the engine, and Freya was standing outside getting some fresh air and relief from the crush of bodies in the small house. She was considering that having a big family meant you had to be friendly, just as the door behind her opened and Edmundos Frye came out.

“Bit too much for you?” he asked.

“A little,” she admitted, looking back into the evening air. The lights were still on in the factories, indicating that when it was around, work was pretty much twentyfourseven.

“Well, folks want to meet the new arrival,” he explained. “Got people come from miles away, just to see Bethany.”

Freya smiled. “Worth the trip, don’t you think?”

“Oh, I wouldn’t disagree with you on that topic.” He pulled a small cigar from his pocket. “Do you mind?”

She shook her head. “No, please.”

Mr Frye lit up, puffing to get a good head going. “Your man Jayne gave me a couple, but I’ll save them for later.”

“He likes a good cigar,” she agreed.

“So what’s with the name?”

Freya grinned into the darkness. “I don’t know. I never got up the courage to ask.”

“I guess it explains why he looks the way he does.” Mr Frye inhaled. “Being called Jayne must make you wanna beat up on people.”

“I think it’s just a coincidence.”

“Could be.” There was a silence, then he went on, “Mrs Reynolds, when you came last time, you told me you’d look after Kaylee.”

“That I did.”

“And you have. So now I have to ask. Do you know why she ain't agreeing to marry the young doctor?”

Freya was surprised. “I ... I don’t know.”

“Have you asked her?”

“Well, no. I just figured she’d say yes when she was ready.”

“Weren't you?”

“I don’t –“

“Kaylee wrote us, told us you’d lost a baby.”

Freya closed her eyes. “I … yes.”

“How’d that happen?”

She remembered falling, but not hitting. Just being in the air … “It was an accident. Nothing anyone could’ve done.”

“But you were going to marry the

Comments
Friday, 01 December 2006 17:50
“I’m kinda engaged already.”

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! I don't know why that cracks me up, but it does. Everyone's always so sure Simon's the one leaving secrets behind, and here's Kaylee engaged. Methinks her trip wth Serenity wasn't as innocent as it seemed? She wouldn't be the first one to ship out to avoid a marriage.

So is Simon going to have to square off with a local boy for the right to his lady? This seems like it could get rather interesting...
Friday, 01 December 2006 18:01
Oh good Lord! Kaywinnet, I could kick her in the pigu ... so who is this mystery man? Perhaps he's still on Phoros and we'll get to meet him?

Something tells me Simon is gonna freak when he finds out ... oh boy, let the fun begin!
Friday, 01 December 2006 18:45
Kaylee engaged already? There is no way in *diyu* that bombshell would not have been shared with Inara! And I can't imagine Kaylee leading Simon on while still promised to another man so it will be interesting to see how you explain the why and the wherefore. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 01 December 2006 18:59
While I agree that Kaylee most likely would have told Inara, not telling Simon is definitely the way she'd go.

It appears that no one but her (and presumably the guy or gal in question) knows about things, including her family. Telling Simon would scre the bejesus out of him, and he'd back off - not only because it's "proper", but because anyone who stands in the way of an existing engagement might come under some scrutiny, and he'd want to avoid that.

Of course, that ain't going to make him feel any better...poor Simon has trust issues as it is, and this can't help.
Friday, 01 December 2006 22:17
Yes! I guessed it right! I knew it had to be something like a previous engagement! And I get the feeling that the whole deal's complicated...like Kaylee said yes to a previous beau's proposal, something happened to make her think he was dead and gone, she upped with Serenity after grieving, fell for Simon...and found out recently that Fiance #1 is still alive. At least that's how I would handle the scenario;)

Amazing work as always, Jane0904!

BEB
Saturday, 01 March 2008 19:26
"I'm kinda engaged already."

I love this!

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