Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Best Served Cold

Wednesday, November 29, 2006

A dark ficle, not fitting anywhere really in my scheme of things, although it's the same characters. So read and comment!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3473    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal sat at the table, nursing a drink, looking as if he’d been there for hours. Just waiting.

A man shouldered his way through the doors, heading for the bar. “Beer,” he ordered, then leaned back to look around. The barman poured, then nodded, whispering something. The man turned his gaze on Mal. He picked up his beer and ambled over. “Man says you were looking for me.”

“Depends,” Mal said, not looking up, just taking a mouthful of alcohol and letting it burn down his throat.

“On what?”

“I heard tell you know women in this town.”

The man grinned. “I know a few. What kind were you looking for?”

“Something different.”

“Yeah, know a few of them too.” The man pulled out the chair opposite and sat down. “What for did you want one?”

Mal looked up, his blue eyes cold. “What else would a man want a woman for?”

The man laughed, a hungry sound, lustful. “Got that right.”

“Of course,” Mal went on, “I wouldn’t want it to be anyone local. Just in case …”

“I know what you mean,” the man said, winking.

“I'm sure you do.”

“Yeah, there was this one little filly came in, day or two ago. Tall, powerful … just kinda wanted to look at her.” He smiled lasciviously. “Only a‘course that weren't the only thing you wanted to do. Kinda get hold of that short hair, pull her onto ya …”

“Did you?” Mal asked.

The man shrugged. “I went up to her, talked to her. She was friendly enough at first, then sorta froze on me. Don’t know, but bitches like that seem to take against me sometimes.”

“Why? What did you do?”

“Guess I mighta had my hand on her ass. Sure was fine, though. Firm. Wanted to take a bite outta it, you know what I mean?”

“Yeah.”

“She said something about taking it away, only I know she didn’t mean it. Women say one thing, mean another. ‘Specially since I was gettin’ friendly. So I squeezed.”

“And?”

“She hit me.” The man touched his jaw, stroking it. “Put me down on the floor. Poured a beer over me too, told me to cool off.” His face darkened

Comments
Wednesday, 29 November 2006 11:25
Mal seems all warm, but i think everyone knows he's entirely capable of that and more. The coldness ya portray is perfect for the part/situation

much awesome.
Wednesday, 29 November 2006 12:39
I think Mal was more than generous not killing that scumbag outright. I loved the way that Mal let the man talk his way deeper and deeper into trouble. Nice that that barman sided with Mal once he heard what had happened. Yep, righteous indignation and fury can sure pile on a ton of hurt. I hope Freya recovers okay. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 29 November 2006 14:53
Oh that man messed with the wrong woman. It would have been a bit interesting if the woman he'd attacked hadn't been Freya, but another woman on his ship ... it would have shown that even after he's married he's still got that overprotective streak a mile long.

A tad dark, but completely in character!
Thursday, 30 November 2006 02:26
Damn...this is something I would have really liked to see (in general as a episode, not specifically) as a character moment for Mal: seemingly friendly and open-minded towards misogynistic behaviour...till the evidence is clear and he just goes wrathful angel on the scumbucket who dared to make his promises of protection invalid.

That and the fact the man had no respect for a fighter. Sneaky shot with a plank indeed....

BEB

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