Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Vows - Part V

Monday, November 27, 2006

The theft gets underway ... Thanks for the feedback - but don't stop!

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Simon was … well, scared probably wasn't too strong a term for it. Terrified might be better. Saffron had him pinned against the panelling in one of the rooms upstairs. “No, really, thank you for the offer, but … you’re not my type,” he insisted as she leaned into him.

She smiled. “I’m sure I could be.”

“No, really.”

“But that’s what we’re here for,” she said. “To have fun.”

“But not yet.” Simon squeezed out and stood by the open doorway. “That’s not until this evening, is it?”

“We could always –“

“No!” His voice sounded loud even to his own ears.

Saffron pouted. “Ah well.” She looked at him. “Are you sure we’ve never met before?”

“I … don’t think so,” Simon managed to say. “I’ve not been off Londinium until just a short while ago.”

“But you seem so familiar.” She moved closer and stroked his thigh.

“Thank you, but I’m still not interested.”

“Why not?” she asked. “You came and started talking to me.”

“No. To your husband, actually.” Simon felt the treacherous tide creep up his neck again.

“My …” Saffron almost laughed out loud. “You’re sly?”

“I … please don’t say anything.”

“But you’re married!”

“And I love my wife. But sometimes I …” The blush had reached his cheeks.

“You like to indulge that part of you?”

“Yes.”

Saffron nodded wisely. At least she knew now it wasn’t anything to do with her. “Then, would you mind telling my husband that I’d like to see him up here?” she asked, giving him some space.

“No, of course.” He stepped back hurriedly, aware he was being ungentlemanly but doing it nevertheless.

“Thank you.” She smiled and reached out to touch his cheek. “And remember when the time comes. For the pairing. I‘m sure we can find something for all of us to do.”

Simon gave a little bow. “Of course.” He almost ran down the stairs.

Saffron laughed. So young, and so very inexperienced. If she wasn’t actually working, it would be fun to make him fall in love with her. Ah well, better get to work..

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“Anything?

Comments
Monday, 27 November 2006 11:59
I just knew she wouldn't let Mal off the hook that easy. I'm hoping Jayne stops her little game. Wouldn't it be neat to drag Saffron before the judge with the stolen statue and set the record straight? I would so love to see that scheming *pofu* get her come uppance. And when a chapter or so back Mal was thinking of who else she was married to then decided to leave Haymer's name out of it, why didn't he mention Monty? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 27 November 2006 12:36
i can't wait to see what happens Saffron please continue soon
Monday, 27 November 2006 13:46
Oh poor Simon. Now I really do feel for him. I cracked up when Saffron thought he was sly....then did it again when he played it up.

Mal, on the other hand, seems screwed. I say 'seems' because as I recall Jayne is out there somewhere, so maybe he'll come to the rescue.

In either case: Awesome cliffhanger.

Once again, your ficiness (yes, that's a word now) outshines itself.
Monday, 27 November 2006 14:52
Oh, I like the idea of Mal dragging her before the judge with the stolen statue, but then I'm thinking he'll get fingered as an accomplice.

Still, great cliffhanger ... I really hope Saffron gets hers.

And Simon playing up the sly bit was a stroke of genius ... something tells me he's going to be very amorous with Kaylee when he gets back on board!
Monday, 27 November 2006 17:57
I was wondering that too, AMDOBELL...I wonder if Monty wasn't called on because the Operative made sure he couldn't. That or Mal realized that Monty, while a mighty strong character witness against Saffron, is a smuggler like Mal & co.

And please let Jayne get the drop on her...she needs to get her just desserts! Though I get the feeling that the crew will have to do a bit of fancy talking to get around how Mal looks like an accomplice if she was hauled before a judge:(

BEB

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