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Tough, Part 4

Sunday, November 26, 2006


Summary: Yet another Pirate Children story. Set twenty-eight years post-BDM. A not-so-fluffy (but still slightly fluffy) look at the future. Serenity's adjusting to her grown children.

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Title: Tough

Rating: PG-13. For swearing (Firefly) and violence.

Characters: the whole crew, plus the Pirate Children and Alistair Caramia (the latter are mine, the rest are Joss's)

Pairings: Canon pairings. I will openly admit that I heavily, heavily favor Mal and Inara and the Reynolds Family. (Trying hard to rectify that without negatively affecting the storyline.)

Summary: Yet another Pirate Children story. Set twenty-eight years post-BDM. A not-so-fluffy (but still slightly fluffy) look at the future. Serenity's adjusting to her grown children.

Author's Note: A shorter chapter, but full of important action. One more chapter to go. I know some of you are a little put off by the reemergance of YoSafBridge, but I want to point out that it's not like she was stalking them for twenty-five years. This is more a crime of convenience. And as Serra said last chapter: "Oh, how the mighty have fallen."

Part 4

“What is he doing?” Kacey asks, leaning against the wall next to Lolly up on the catwalk. The captain is staring at the sinking sun, occasionally pacing back and forth. “He and Aunt ‘Nara get in another fight?”

While Mal and Inara’s fights, legendary among the crew, were once the subject of many jokes and laughs, everyone on Serenity has been taking them a little more seriously recently.

Lolly just looks at him out of the corner of her eye, recrossing her arms over her chest, face on the border between hurt and contempt.

“Aw, c’mon, Lol… You have to talk to me at some point. This is a small boat, and sooner or later you’re gonna have to ask me to pass the salt.”

Lolly humphs a little and walks off.

“Real grown up, Leila Lee!”

“Really grown up,” a voice corrects behind him, teasing admonishment in her voice. “Please try to make it seem like I taught you something in the nearly twenty years I’ve been aboard. Otherwise you make me feel entirely useless.”

“Hi, Ally,” Kacey greets his former tutor, and as Lolly and Serra so love to bring up, Abe’s and his first love.

“I’ve heard

Comments
Sunday, 26 November 2006 04:22
Oh, cao, isn't this a fine mess? I love Mal and Serra fighting in front of Saffron and ignoring her, of course, they probably should have guessed that it would piss her off enough to shoot at someone!

Can the second bullet, the one that hit Saffron, have come from Inara, please? Something tells me she's desperate enough to do anything ...

And the opening with Kacey and Ally was great - bribery with food - ha! Love it!
Sunday, 26 November 2006 04:53
I beg we swap Serra and Saffron's wounds and leave that scheming cheating *pofu* dying on that dirtball planet and Serra with just a graze for her trouble. Please don't let Serra die! The only good thing is that Mal and Serra have at last stopped yelling at each other, but oh what a cost! I still can't believe Serra cut a deal with Saffron. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 26 November 2006 05:19
Oh...please please please let Inara been the shooter who pegged Saffron! Cuz I know Jayne, Zoe or River would have hit her somewhere else besides the shoulder!

;)

Still...this was some brilliantly tense stuff, AWindsor! Definitely can't wait to see Mal and Serra have a nice long heart-to-heart about things. Not asking for perfect harmony, but at least some major repair done to their relationship. Please?

BEB
Sunday, 26 November 2006 15:11
Excellent stuff, but PLEASE say she makes it! And why was she in Fed jail?
Monday, 27 November 2006 00:51
wow, I'm surprised by this one. i don't really see the old saffron shooting mal's little girl point blank--she prefers putting people in the position to be killed easily--but i'm willing to believe the years have changed her. i'm guessing they havent been pleasant to our favorite serial bride.

anyway, interested to hear more about serra's 'hump buddy' back on Shadow and how she ended up in an alliance jail--very believable judging by her attitude toward the purple bellies.

my favorite part of this chapter, though, was the image of mal pacing in the cargo bay, and then jumping in the mule to go find serra. it was just so perfectly in character.

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