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Best Intentions, ch. 13

Saturday, November 25, 2006

Post-BDM. Mal tells Inara why he's got a bee in his bonnet while the crew celebrates Simon and Kaylee's engagement ... and then the sh** hits the fan. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara

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A/N: This one's a bit shorter, but I had to end it on a good cliffhanger ... I would describe this chapter as fluff with a healthy dollop of angst - enjoy!

Thanks once again to Leiasky for keeping me honest. And to all the readers and especially reviewers who take the time to leave feedback. Your comments are enough to make me smile.

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Best Intentions, ch. 13

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Inara, Mal and River made it back to their apartment in silence, the three of them tired and drained from the stress of being awoken in the middle of the night. Once inside, River drifted towards the guest room almost immediately, more than happy to go back to sleep. Turning to watch the couple as they moved in the direction of their room, she said quietly, “Remember, be honest.”

Sharing a confused look, both Mal and Inara smiled at her as Mal murmured, “G’night lil’ one.”

“Good night,” she sighed, her voice growing fainter as she left the room and fell again into her nice, comfy bed, asleep within moments of her head hitting the pillow.

On the other side of the apartment, Mal and Inara had a much more difficult time relaxing enough to drift off. Inara had sensed Mal’s foul mood the minute Kaylee had announced her engagement to Simon and it puzzled her. Sure, Mal had had some difficulty with Simon and Kaylee when they had first gotten involved, but over the past six months, Inara had thought he’d learned to live with it; thought he’d been able to look past his own insecurities and notice how truly happy Kaylee, and for that matter Simon, was. But it seemed as if that maturity had just been a façade.

As he flopped about and sighed heavily several times, Inara, with an eye roll, rolled onto her side facing him, propping her head up on one hand. Staring at him, it took him a full minute to turn to face her. “Yes?” he asked quietly, his voice tinged with annoyance.

“Is there a problem?” she asked, allowing her tone to match his.

Sighing, he rubbed a hand over his eyes and muttered, “No.”

Inar

Comments
Saturday, 25 November 2006 17:55
ooo, I knew that was gonna happen - Simon's parents paying a call...hmm, did River call them or...how'd they know?? Did they find out through the hospital? Intrigue! I'm glad Kaylee's doing better now, and loved Mal's speech, especially: “Mei mei, when you came on my boat, I thought for sure I’d stolen somebody’s sunshine." That was so sweet!!!

Again, you are indeed a talented writer. Looking forward to reading more. (actually, I came in on the last chapter after looking for something to read. Now I need to go back and read all of the previous chapters!!! lol) :D
Saturday, 25 November 2006 17:57
Oh my goodness! Gabriel and Regan!

Can't wait to see what happens next
Saturday, 25 November 2006 19:37
Oh, Lord. This won't end well. Daddy's gonna pressure him to take the hospital job, ain't he?

Did River spill the beans? If so, she deserves a whoopin'. No good can come of this.
Saturday, 25 November 2006 21:46
River examining Simon, hoping for the best for him, after all he'd sacrificed was such a sweet momment. I was so wrapped up in the story and your description of River's hopes for Simon that I completely forgot about your warning that this would end with a cliffhanger. I honestly thought good ole Doc Eli was going to show up. *smacks forehead*

Please post the next part soon, the suspense is killing me.
Saturday, 25 November 2006 21:50
Forgot to add that something tells me they're not just there to congratulate him. No, I think we're going to see how Simon's parents machinations compare to Inara's parents, with simiarly disastorous results.
Sunday, 26 November 2006 02:01
Couldn't the Tams be less with the evil manipulations for once. We could have a whole reconciliation thing between Simon and River and their parents.
Sunday, 26 November 2006 02:11
Oh boy...part of me wants for this surprise arrival to mean good things, but most of me ain't quite that gullible:(

Loved this chapter to bits, TamSibling! Especially Mal's conversation to Inara and his speech to the happy couple. Oh...and the cliffie was rather shiny too;)

BEB
Sunday, 26 November 2006 04:40
This was lovely. I felt my heart warm when Mal confessed to Inara his worry that Kaylee and her would leave and should leave, have all the shiny things Serenity could never provide even though it was hurting him to even think of losing either one. And Inara so gentle and understanding, and loving too. That toast had me laughing outright - perfect! But oh my, mummy and daddy Tam have come calling. I so hope they don't do or say anything to ruin the happy moment. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 26 November 2006 04:54
Oh, crap.
Didn't see that coming.
Sunday, 26 November 2006 10:14
Oh sweet Buddha yes!

Things just got turned up a notch (or ten), and I confess that I'm hopeful that the arrival of the elder Tams means happy things. Judging by what River said, it seems to be the case...but that may only be for now.

Mal's toast was a stroke of genius. You captured him perfectly, and his fears and doubts over Inara, as well as Kaylee and Simon staying behind and not returning to Serenity were so very like him-not realising they love the ship as much as he does.

Brilliant chapter!
Monday, 27 November 2006 15:39
Mal's conversation was sooo very much in character. It hit on his concerns for his family and his worry that he didn't want them to leave.

His toast was so very Mal and the Tam's arrival was the perfect place to end this chapter! What ELSE could go wrong? No, don't answer that. I know you. You'll find a way. . . Hee!
Wednesday, 29 November 2006 13:31
You both deserve to be surrounded by rich things an’ pamperin’ an’ people who don’t name their sidearms or rub soup in your hair.”
~ BWAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!!

I like the cliffhanger of their parents showing up.

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