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Vows - Part II

Friday, November 24, 2006

Second in a short series. A face from the past and a new problem ... Thank so much for the positive feedback on this and my other stories! You make it worthwhile!

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“That’s him,” said the woman outside, pointing directly at him. “That’s my husband.”

Mal stared at the red-head in front of him. “Saffron?” His mouth dropped. “What the diyu –“

“Captain Malcolm Reynolds?” asked one of the men standing behind her, not seeing the smile on her face.

“What?” He stared at him. “Yes. Look, what –“

“You are bound by law and ordered to stand down.” The man, whom Mal now realised was in a Federal uniform, stepped forward and produced a set of handcuffs.

Mal backed up. “Whoa, there. What for?”

“It may be fine on some of the border moons, sir, but bigamy is still illegal on Boros.”

“Big …” Mal felt his jaw drop again.

“Mal?” Freya was beside him, a sheet wrapped around her. “What’s going on?”

“Not rightly sure,” he managed to say. “Saffron …”

“And that’s her,” the young woman, sniffing most sorrowfully, said. “The one who took him from me.”

“Mal?” Freya looked from one to the other, a murderous gleam starting to appear in her eye. “Is this who I think it is?”

“We ain’t married!” he insisted.

“No, sir, I should say you’re not,” the Fed said, reaching to take hold of Mal’s wrists.

“No,” Mal said, moving back. “Not me and her,” he pointed to Freya. “Me and her!” He pointed to Saffron.

“Well, that will be for a court to decide. I imagine they’re going to enjoy this.” He smiled, but with no humour in it. “Particularly with what we’ve found on board your ship.”

---

“What is it?” Zoe asked, looking round at River who was clinging to Jayne.

“Intruders.”

Zoe’s hand slapped to her thigh, but she was unarmed. “ Gao yang jong duh goo yang ,” she muttered. “Should never go anywhere without it.”

Hank walked a few paces ahead, able to see Serenity’s cargo bay doors were open.

“Get back here, little man,” Jayne whispered loudly.

“Looks like they’re Feds,” Hank said, ducking behind the corner of a building.

“Feds?” Zoe joined him. “What would they be doing breaking into our ship?”

Jayne was suddenly a

Comments
Friday, 24 November 2006 09:14
*lol* Saffron is really begging Freya to shoot her, isn't she. I can't wait to read the next part.
Friday, 24 November 2006 09:53
If this whole scheme was something dreamt up by Saffron, which I'm assuming it was, I am puzzled as to where she intends to go with this. Usually there is a scam involved with something shiny like money or the lassiter involved. Just getting back at Mal for frustrating her last efforts to dupe him doesn't seem enough for all this. And roping Badger in would have been so easy for her. Maybe Badger is Saffron's *real* husband? Now wouldn't those two make a perfect pair. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 24 November 2006 11:54
Oh man, this is going pretty much straight into the heart of 'not good' territory for Mal. Freya is gonna kill him, but probably after she makes YoSaffBridge scream like a dying puppy.

Release Mal into that devil woman's clutches? Genius plot device! That little move will make things hell for Mal, interesting for YoSaffBridge, unfair for Freya but Mega Happy Fun for us!

Jane0904, you've outdone yourself!
Friday, 24 November 2006 22:02
Oh...why do I get the feeling Saffron is busting Mal's balls for both the double cross on the Lassiter job...and cuz she needs his skills on another job. A job whose completion would mean she retracts her claims on Mal;)

Still...that ending was a brilliant twist, Jane0904! Definitely could imagine Joss pulling something like this. But you did it first;D

BEB
Saturday, 25 November 2006 12:25
I've never liked Saffron and at this moment, I hate her! She is such a scheming, lying, hun dan ... but I digress. This is a great plot. I can't wait to read more!

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