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Shades - Part IV: The Conclusion

Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Final part and all plot (for those who don't like the fluff). Whitefall ... Please let me know what you liked - or didn't!

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Freya squatted down and picked up a handful of dirt, letting it run through her fingers.

“You feeling antsy?” Jayne asked, shouldering Vera.

“Something’s not right.” She scanned the horizon. “There’s no sign of any habitation. And we’re a hell of a long way from a town.”

“I know what you mean. Seems to me Mal’s been taking what those folks have been saying a mite too easy.”

“It’s Maddy,” Freya agreed. “He won’t believe she isn’t everything she seems. What he remembers.”

“I’m thinking he’s beginning to regret that about now.” He sniffed. “I’m gonna take a bigger walk around. You comin’?”

Freya nodded and stood up.

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“Mal, did you say they could use the mule?” Hank asked, looking out of the bridge window.

Mal joined him. Outside, just in view, Jess Adams was sitting on Serenity’s old mule. Even at this distance they could see he was fidgeting. He was looking around anxiously.

“No. Maybe they’re considering borrowing it for all their gear. They sure had enough.”

“Without asking?”

“I’ll see.” He headed off the bridge and down the main stairs. He could see Maddy in the cargo bay, moving boxes. “You planning on stealing my mule, Maddy?” he asked.

Maddy gave a start and almost dropped the box she had in her hands. “What?”

“Jess Adams. He’s outside, waiting. Looks suspiciously as if he’s on my old mule, which I see isn’t where I left it.” He nodded to the corner where the old vehicle still lived. “It may not be much, but there’s sentimental value in that thing.”

“We were just going to borrow it.” The trembling in her voice gave her away.

“Borrow.” Mal took a deep breath and looked down. When he raised his eyes again there was honest bafflement in them. “What’s going on, Maddy?”

“Nothing? Why should there be anything going on?”

“Here we are on Whitefall, at the coordinates you gave us, and there’s nothing here. No ranches, no towns. Just a whole load of nothing. And you’re about to run out on everyone with Jess Adams.”

“Mal, that’s ri

Comments
Wednesday, 22 November 2006 16:02
Yeah for weddings! I really hope that you do the wedding and let us see the craziness, I can only imagine!

Wednesday, 22 November 2006 17:15
This was perfect! I loved how the crew all worked seamlessly together to make sure that scheming piece of *goushi* Maddy didn't get a chance to finish her plan. What a rat. Loved how they made sure Patience didn't put bullet holes in any of them either. The only problem with dumping Maddy and Jess on Whitefall was that it has atmo. Can't wait for the gorram wedding, this series is so shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 23 November 2006 23:33
Mal ain't that much of a hundan, Alison...man might shy away from the Good Book and its teachings most of the time, but he don't kill people less he has to;)

Great work here, Jane0904! Definitely loved the showdown between the crew and Patience's posse. It's nice to see the pattern's been broken for Mal visiting Whitefall and getting shot at by Patience;)

BEB
Friday, 24 November 2006 05:32
YES! Justice is served! That Maddy is one piece of work I tells ya, so I was glad as all get out to ee her get her commupance, and Jesse to get his. What a pair of low down dirty deceivers!

Wedding time, you say? And about damn time too!

This was a fitting finale to this arc, congrats Jane0904!

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