Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Shades

Sunday, November 19, 2006

Following BIRTHDAY, this is more fluff than angst, but with plot thrown in. First of several parts. Feedback, good or bad, is needed!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3569    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Freya was cleaning her guns on the dining table. She had stripped one down and oiled its parts, and was now fitting it expertly back together. Sliding the final component home she cocked the weapon and pointed it, smoothly pulling the trigger so that it clicked.

“You expect us to eat around that?” Mal said from the doorway.

Freya looked up. “No, I'm going to clean it up.”

“Well, see that you do.” Mal stepped down into the dining area and went over to the kitchen.

“You okay?” Freya asked. “You seem a mite … tetchy this morning. After last night, too.”

“I ain’t tetchy.”

“Okay, preoccupied then. Ever since you got that message yesterday.”

“It’s just a job.” Mal filled a cup with coffee and looked at her, her back to him, over the counter, her tattoo just visible above the top of her shirt. “That’s all.”

“Am I missing something?” Freya turned in her seat.

Mal went to take a sip, then put the cup down so hard some of the hot liquid spilled onto his hand, but he ignored it. “This job …” he began. “The pick-up tomorrow … it’s on Shadow.”

Realisation dawned in Freya’s eyes. “Oh. You could have said no.”

“It’s just a planet.”

“It’s your home planet. Where you were born. Grew up. Joined the independents from.”

“I seem to recall that happening, yes.”

“Have you been back since the war?”

Mal shook his head. “Nope. Didn’t seem to be any point. Nothing left there for me.” He picked up his cup again, noticed the coffee on the back of his hand and licked it off. He joined her at the table, sitting opposite.

“You still could have said no.”

“We’ll be there for maybe a couple of hours – no more. I can stand it for that.”

“You shoulda said something before. People understand.”

“It’s in the past, Frey. It’s not me any more.”

“I know that feeling,” she agreed fervently. “But it’s making you –“

“Tetchy?”

“Uncomfortable. Do you want me and Zoe to handle it?”

“Afraid I’ll break down the minute I touch soil? Somehow I find that difficult to imag

Comments
Sunday, 19 November 2006 20:53
Ooops, who in the nine hells is Maddy? Please don't let it be a long lost love, I would hate anything to ruin Mal and Freya's Big Day. Loved all the fluffy goodness too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 19 November 2006 20:57
Freya's comment on being Mrs. Reynolds made me think to myself, "Yeah, because the last one worked out so well."

She might want to wash that name before she goes wearing it around.
Monday, 20 November 2006 00:50
A date is finally set, and it's about damn time too! I love it how Frey rejected Persephone on the basis that Badger would be there...he is a mite creepy.

LOVED the scenes with Mal and Freya talking in his bunk, it was really light in tone, but completely serious at the same time. Really well done.

The image you painted (typed, whatever) of Shadow's scorched landscape was aweseome. I can totally imagine it looking like that, all dead and decaying.
Speaking of Shadow...who in the nine hell's is Maddie? Mal's little sister or cousin is my bet.

Great work!
Monday, 20 November 2006 20:53
Ya know...call me strange or unfocused, but I feel the most strongly for Inara right now. Oh sure...I am overjoyed Freya finally set a date and am joyful the rest of the crew is doing well at this jucture...but I really gotta wonder about how Inara will deal with this. Not easy watching the man you love (even if you gave him up) marrying someone who has become a good friend:(

Still...can't wait to see how this "Maddy" affects things between Mal and Freya and/or Mal and the crew;)

BEB
Tuesday, 21 November 2006 14:28
I loved the interaction between Mal and Freya in their bunk. It was so sweet and deep at the same time.

And Maddy ... don't really like that new wrinkle ... Bring on the angst!

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