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The Hunter & The Hunted: Chapter One, The Hunt Begins

Saturday, November 18, 2006

The story continues as the crew of Serenity head for cover and the Hunter gives chase.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2568    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The story continues. Sorry if this chapter seems to be a lot shorter than the others, sadly this was unavoidable for reasons thai won't bore you with. Iv'e kept in everything of importance and i hope that you enjoy this.

Special thanks go out to all those who commented on my last piece, more of the same please! Same deal as last time, all comments welcome even critiscm so long as its constructive.

Obviously I don’t own Firefly or Serenity…blah blah blah… Joss Whedon rules the world…blah blah blah… Hope that you like it. Yay fanfic!

Chapter One.

Mal gazed around the common area, his eyes alighting briefly on each grief stricken face. Each member of the crew had responded differently to the news of Monty’s death; from Kaylee who was even now weeping softly in Simons arms, to River who had sat stock still an head bowed throughout the entire tale muttering to herself in a quiet sing song voice and casting the occasional veiled looks at Jayne or Zoë. But the time for weeping was long past and now there were questions that needed to be answered.

“Do we actually know what it is he wants?”, asked Inara, her usually smooth and silken voice made rough by repressed tears.

“You mean besides wanting us all dead?”, answered Mal. “Don’t truly know and I don’t truly care. He means harm to me and mine and that’s all that matters”.

“But wasn’t there some sort of amnesty?”, queried Simon, his brow furrowed from concern. “I mean didn’t the Operative say that he’d tell the Alliance that we were no longer a threat?”

“Yeah well apparently they weren’t listening--”, began Mal, but he stopped short as River’s head shot up, wide eyed and fearful.

“They don’t stop”, her voice blank and unemotional. “They never stop. Knock one down and another takes it’s place. They can’t stop, too much faith not enough sense. They don‘t think, just obey. Kill, maim, steal. No questions asked”.

“Well whatever the hell it is that he’ after I don’t intend to let him waltz in here and take it”, replied Mal his hands clenching in determin

Comments
Sunday, 19 November 2006 02:33
Holy Crap! The Hunter caught them quick!

I like the way you detail he Reaverfied part of him, it really helps understand his mindset. The fact that the sane and insane parts of him fight for control is well done.

Man, I can't wait for this little (big, whatever) confrontation to begin...should be VERY interesting, and contain some fames middle high excitement.

Bring on Chapter 2!
Sunday, 19 November 2006 09:08
I am curious as to how the Hunter found Serenity so quickly or is he, in his madness, able to somehow home in on River because of what has been done to them both? Chilling. This is not an enemy I would want on my tail. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 20 November 2006 08:27
Definitely loving how you've made the Hunter a counterpoint or double to River, in that they are both mentally unstable individuals filled with knowledge and a drive to cause major harm when properly stimulated. Certainly takes Joss' concept of a mirrored protagonist and antagonist from the BDM (Mal vs. Operative) and expands upon the broached subjects;D

BEB

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