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Tough

Friday, November 17, 2006

Another Pirate Children story. Serenity tries to adjust to her grown children and aging crew. The times, they are a'changin'.

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Title: Tough

Rating: PG. For now, but it could bump up. Will bump up.

Characters: the whole crew, plus the Pirate Children and Alistair Caramia (the latter are mine, the rest are Joss's)

Pairings: Canon pairings. I will openly admit that I heavily, heavily favor Mal and Inara and the Reynolds Family.

Summary: Yet another Pirate Children story. Set twenty-eight years post-BDM. A not-so-fluffy (but still slightly fluffy) look at the future. Serenity's adjusting to her grown children.

Author's Note: This one's gonna be controversial. It's not light, it's not fluffy, and Serra is no longer cute and prococious. There are now twelve adults trying to live on Serenity and be useful. Abe's in medacad. And all will be revealed in time. This skips almost a decade from Hell-Raising and though the first chapter doesn't answer any more questions than it raises, details will either be filled in by the characters or by later PC fics.

For newbies:

Brother, Shadow, Mischief, Pirate Children, Hell-Raising (whew, that list is getting long)

Kacey Washburn, 27

Lolly Tam, 26

Abe Reynolds, 24 (medacad on Ariel)

Serra Reynolds, 19

Alistair Caramia (ladies don't reveal their ages)

Part 1

“Dress it up like ya like, empire is empire is Alliance,” Serra says, holding the big, burly man’s eyes steadily, and then takes a large sip of her mug of local brew.

“Gorrammit Mal,” the man Serra calls Uncle Monty laughs thunderously, “Ya’ve raised yourself a right little Browncoat.”

“Yeah, noticed that,” Mal sighs, likewise nursing a beer. He looks uncomfortable at his daughter’s political ramblings. “Wasn’t working on it; just happened on its own.”

“Despite my best efforts,” Inara says from beside him, sipping on a much more girly drink.

Serra continues to discuss the state of the ‘verse from her view, where the Independents went wrong and where they could go right. The whole thing scares Mal more than a mite. She sounds like he did before joining up, except a helluva lot more intelligent. Guess that’s his puni

Comments
Friday, 17 November 2006 04:40
favorite line:
“Aww, Lolly, you’re my favorite little prude.”

yep, that's wash's kid.

yay more! and...yosafbrig???

beautiful writing as always, but something about this scares me. mal tossing serra off ship? meimei killing people? i feel like there will be mal/inara tension and mal/meimei tension and inara/meimei tension and...

can't wait ;)
Friday, 17 November 2006 04:49
It's YoSaffBridge, right?

Love the characterisation of the Pirate Children, and the older crew just as much. Pitch perfect, the lot of them, AND you had ol' Monty make an appearance!

With that low down, dirty deciever on the prowl after the crew, things just got mighty ominious!

Can't wait for the next installment!
EPM0001
Friday, 17 November 2006 04:50
Yes..Yes..Yes...more of your lovely stories!! I was so happy to see it tonight. Very good stuff.
Friday, 17 November 2006 06:10
Definitely YoSaffBridge. If she thought a Renyolds is a handful, I have a feeling adding in a Washburne and a Tam will put her in he grave. Quite literally.

She is so screwed.
Friday, 17 November 2006 12:06
This was great! I love the idea of YoSaffBridge still out for revenge. She's petty enough to not let bygones be bygones, although I would thought she'd have gotten herself dead by now!

But I love this ... it makes perfect sense to me that Mei-Mei would follow in her father's footsteps. She's always looked up to him. I agree with other readers though, the amount of tension and angst this could bring about is staggering.

And what exactly happened to Mei-Mei in those six months off ship? I hope that's one of the questions that gets answered!
Saturday, 18 November 2006 07:47
oooooohhhhhhh.... saffron's gonna cause trouble for our favourite little pirate children ain't she???
weird having all our kids grown up- especially mei mei. still, i'm enjoying. don't take long for the next chappie!!!
-Fred
Saturday, 18 November 2006 22:14
This is so good but who the bitter and twisted woman on the sidelines plotting and scheming? Not sure it is Yosaffbridge though. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 19 November 2006 22:16
Dunno, Alison...who elese but YoSaffBridge would be petty enough to keep dying her hair long past the point of looking natural, undergo more plastic surgeries than Michael Jackson and still rage on about her fair comeuppance for "Trash" after slightly more than a quarter-century? It's her and she's gotten a lot more dangerous, from the sounds of it:(

Still...definitely wanna see more of this adult version of Serra. Inara's physical presence and intelligence, with Mal's honour, courage and lack of self-preservation;D

BEB

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