Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Hank

Wednesday, November 15, 2006

Sixth in the short episodes following BIRTHDAY. Hank has an unexpected visitor ... please, like it or loath it, let me know.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3320    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Hank was reading, some trashy novel he’d picked up on his last buying trip, on his back, his head resting on one arm. He couldn’t much lie on his side yet, what with the bullet wound still healing, but he was glad to be back in his bunk. The fact that it had taken Jayne to help him down the ladder still rankled, but he’d live with that. Truth was, he couldn’t stand being around the infirmary any longer, not with Mal spending so much time there. As much as he liked the captain, him and Freya together getting all lovey dovey were sometimes more than a body could stand.

He turned the next page, wanting to see what Clint did to make Emily fall for him, and wondered idly whether it would work with Zoe.

“Can I come down?”

Hank jerked, hearing the first mate’s voice just when he was thinking about her, and groaned a little as the injury pulled. “Um, yeah, sure,” he managed to say.

Zoe climbed sedately down the ladder, and Hank watched first her feet, then her thighs and hips, her torso and arms, and finally her beautiful face appear. He blushed a little at the impure thoughts racing around his libido.

“Hank,” she said without preamble. “We need to talk.”

“Oh. Right.” He put the book down on his hips, trying to hide the slight arousal he was feeling. “What about?”

“Us.”

“Us?” he yelped, twitching again. Through gritted teeth he added, “Is there an ‘us’?”

“If you keep doing that you’re going to open up that hole again,” Zoe warned, pulling the one chair in the bunk across and sitting down. “And thanks, I will take the weight off my feet.”

“Oh, yeah. Sorry. Ain't too comfortable, though.”

“It’s fine.” She stared at him until he started to feel nervous. “You heard what I said in the infirmary,” she remarked finally.

“What?” Hank just couldn’t stop the twitching. “When?”

“You weren’t unconscious, not quite.”

“Um, sorry, Zoe, but I don’t know what you’re talking about.” He looked bewildered.

She gazed at him, calculating the odds that he was actually telling the

Comments
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 17:22
I adore Zoe telling Hank the ending of the book and him actually being upset about it!

And I think this was a great convo between them. It was funny and touching and just a tad humiliating for Hank. Perfect!
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 17:29
Oh this is really funny. Can't wait for their wedding!
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 22:04
Ah, this was great and I find myself liking Hank more and more as the tale progressing. Also loved him bravely asking if he could court her. My God the man has courage, must be love! Ali d :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 16 November 2006 00:36
Hank is a fantas character. you've really hit a gold mine of depth and interestingstoryness (oh me speaky good english!). Love the story love your work. keep it up.
Thursday, 16 November 2006 02:43
Gotta hand it to ya, Jane0904...you definitely pulled off a tricky path with this chapter, since you had to stretch out Hank's attempts at getting Zoe to move closer to being able to be with someone again BUT not have her skip several important emotional development points to get to the good stuff quicker;)

And Zoe's spoiling the ending of Hank's book? Totally freaking hilarious, if only cuz it would be something Zoe would do as part of a hazing process to get Hank up to her standards;)

BEB

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