Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Jayne

Wednesday, November 15, 2006

Third in the short episodes following BIRTHDAY. Jayne and his shadow have a conversation ... Your comments are greatly appreciated, and sometimes acted on!

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She hadn’t come down for a meal since they’d got back from Osiris, or if she had, she’d sneaked around grabbing something when no-one was looking. Couldn’t be having that. So he waited up, playing card games. He’d gotten fed-up playing Beat the Clock, and had gone onto Patience before she slid around the door frame.

“There’s a tray over there if’n you want it,” Jayne said, not looking up.

“Hungry,” she said.

“Must be. Ain't eating much, if anything.”

Keeping her distance, almost hugging the wall, River hurried behind the counter, finding the food he’d put aside for her and eating quickly.

Jayne concentrated on the cards in front of him, only listening to the sound of her chewing, hiding between the cabinets like a wild animal. After a minute she stood up, looking at him sitting at the table, his bottle of bourbon and two mugs next to him. “Wanna play cards?” he asked, placing the red eight on the black nine.

“Don’t you want me to talk?” River gazed at him, chewing on the last piece of bread before swallowing.

“Nope. Figure everyone else has tried that, so you ain't gonna want me to do the same.” He turned over the next card, stared at it for a moment then placed it down on the small stack. “Don’t look like this one’s gonna pan out,” he added conversationally.

River moved a little closer and looked over his shoulder. “Put this pile there …” She pointed. “… and then you can start a new one with the ace.”

“Thanks. Didn’t notice that one.” He did as she suggested.

“Why are you here?”

He glanced up at her for the first time, seeing the dark shadows under her eyes, the paleness of an already pale complexion, the way her cheeks were sunken in slightly. “You getting all metaphysical on me?”

He saw her lips twitch slightly. “Have you been reading the dictionary again?” she asked.

“Nah. But can’t help but pick up a few long words living on this boat.” He picked up his mug and waved it at her. “Not sure I understand the meaning of most of ‘em, but I can use ‘em as wel

Comments
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 14:35
I love reading stories where Jayne is a big softie! This was a great moment and I think it's totally appropriate that River would find some kind of acceptance from Jayne.
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 17:21
What Tamsibling said, I agree entirely.

Love the insight into Jayne's head.
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 21:24
I liked the interaction between River and Jayne, and how he watches out for her without saying that is what he is doing. Just there in case she needs someone and that is lovely. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 16 November 2006 00:20
AAAAAWWWWW
But seriously heartfelt, cool insightful stuff. Someone like Jayne is often hard to us in a fic because its hard to know how much of a softer side he has. But like all of the crew family is so important to him and River is his moonbrained lttle sister.
Thursday, 16 November 2006 01:36
See...this is the kind of stuff I would point to prove that Rayne could work. Probably wasn't the intention of Jane0904...but the level of mutual understanding and hands-off assistance River and Jayne enjoy so much really help show how for all of River and Jayne's differences, they can help each other out a lot when the need comes along:D

BEB
Thursday, 16 November 2006 05:27
The initial noncholance of Jayne towards River here was my favourite part. So casual, but saying as much with his words as without them.

I think it was great that it was Jayne to try and comfort River, though using a decidedly unique approach from all the others...couldn't have written it better myself.
Thursday, 16 November 2006 16:05
Thank-you. Aren't many that see the tenderness peeking out under Jayne's bluster. Thinking he might be a bit skittish even so; after all River knifed him *and grabbed him by the manparts. A guy would remember that<G>.

Vera

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