Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Best Intentions, ch. 9

Wednesday, November 15, 2006

Post-BDM. Everyone waits for Kaylee to wake, while Mal tries to get back to Sihnon as fast as possible. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara

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A/N: I realize that posting every other day is a bit torturous, but I have to draw it out somehow!

Thanks again to everyone for the wonderful feedback and support. It means so much to me, I know I don't have words to describe it!

And once again, thanks to Leiasky, who was lucky enough to see the original Firefly costumes this week and now, I'm insanely jealous!

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Best Intentions, ch. 9

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Even at full burn it took Mal and his crew five days to get back to Sihnon. Inara waited for him impatiently on the roof of the hospital. She had arranged for her family’s hovercar to go and pick him up and she could barely stand the waiting.

Inara twisted the fabric of her shawl in her hands, hating how anxious she was, but unable to avoid the feeling. In the five days it had taken Mal to get back here, Kaylee still had not awoken. She didn’t seem to be any worse off, but she wasn’t necessarily getting better and Inara could tell, based on the looks Simon shared with Doctor Butler that neither surgeon liked the prognosis.

Listening intently for the whine of the approaching craft, Inara finally picked it out in the still night air. Stepping to the edge of the platform, she watched as the ship settled down easily. Stepping out from the shadows as the craft powered down, River bounded out first, hugging Inara tightly, before she skipped towards the door. Turning to her, Inara called, “River, maybe you should-“

“Let ‘er go, darlin’. She’s been yappin’ ‘bout seein’ Simon an’ Kaylee for the past week.”

Mal’s voice reached her and Inara turned to face him not even hesitating for a second before she rushed into his arms. He immediately captured her in his strong embrace, holding her tight, his head buried into her soft hair. “Oh, Mal,” she murmured, her voice breaking with the tears she was trying not to cry. “Thank Buddha you’re here.”

“Sorry it took me so long, darlin’,” he told her, his breath warm against her cheek. Even as she tightened her hold on him, he said, “

Comments
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 01:48
Glad to see Kaylee's awake, but I'm not looking forward to the 'you lost the baby' conversation.
My heart is preparing to be broken.
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 07:56
I too really am not looking forward to the conversation between Simon and Kaylee about the miscarriage. Cuz you know Kaylee will go into a depressive funk and Simon will rail against that by saying it was the Serras fault for having an unsavory character follow her around. Happy times are far away...

Still...beautiful stuff here, TamSibling! Especially Inara having to threaten Simon to get more than a handful of hours of sleep;)

BEB
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 09:12
Great story so far. By the way, you're one of my favorite writers in the Blue Sun Room. Can't wait to see more.
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 11:01
Hooray, Kaylee woke up! This was so shiny and Simon and Kaylee were so perfect together. I really like Eli and am glad Mal is back with Inara too. Poor Kaylee, she is going to be heartbroken and filled with guilt again when she finds out about the baby. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 14:12
I wanna know what's Mal going to do to the Serra's. Personally I go for Jayne holding them down while Simon and MAl kick the go se out of them.
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 18:55
I really liked that Inara had to threaten Simon to sleep, with Mal's assurances that it was no joking matter.

Though I don't think it will quite happen this way, I second what laoshi said.
Thursday, 16 November 2006 03:00
I really like Eli. He better not turn out to be some evil plot device in disguise. . .

At least Kaylee is doing better. And I can't wait to see when he tells her about the baby she lost. So much guilt!

And someone just needs to slap Lili Serra real hard.
Thursday, 16 November 2006 06:39
Jeez, way to take us on one hell of a rollercoaster ride in this chapter alone!

Kaylee is comatose, and everything is doom and gloom, with the angsty goodness at full bore.

Kaylee wakes up, and I'm pretty sure that everyone following this series would have felt a MASSIVE weight lifted off their little Kaylee loving hearts. And for a time, everyone is gonna be okay.

Than you go and bring up this miscarriage...sheesh TamSibling, you've turned the ability to write fine angst into an artform.

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